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Midnight Moon


Artists can make pictures. Writers can make worlds.

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Caught in the act, with no means of escape, a man makes one last request to his captors

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 10 )

I'm not sure what just happened, but whatever it was it was sad.

I think we should know more about the. father..

I can feel a lot, but if I saw more developtment I could feel a lot more..

A like anyway!

I was more confused then anything. You should have given us more information about what has happened

I want to know more, what happens now?

MOARRR, make a sequel :D

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Nah, I'm think I should make a prequel before starting a sequel.

5292585 well at least it's MOAR stuff

We miss you, Daddy.

I... I just died. :raritycry:

So sad, yet so beautiful. I would love to know what the dad was doing to get himself killed, but other than that it was great!
Sorry it took me soooo long to get around to reading this. I've had a lot on my plate.

Wow... right in the feels :fluttercry: Sad and heartwarming at the same time. I'd like to say it was a good morning read, but given I now have to go to work with teary eyes, I'm not so sure if it was good for morning... evening would be probably better.

I have to applaud you on how you wrote the characters. Despite the short length, they were all spot on, painted in their typical traits. Thank you for this story!

On a side note, I think maybe a 'Mystery' tag would fit this story for all the unexplained bits and pieces.

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