Vinyl wakes up every night from a horrible nightmare about falling through the open sky to her demise, but the nightmares don't end. Her mental deterioration reaches its peak when she falls unconscious at a party, and then begins her search for answers.
Suffering from hallucinations and intense emotional situations, Vinyl Scratch learns to trust the ponies she holds closest as she tries to find the truth behind her nightmares in this tale of friendship and the supernatural.
Teen for dark implications, references, and occurrences.
Fix this. It's a wall of text. Also, you left out a period after "She closed her eyes".
Make a new paragraph at: "Her", "Below", and "The unicorn".
5277128 I left the period out intentionally because the next line says "and then Vinyl Scratch woke up screaming in her bed." I was trying out a few new writing techniques, and felt like that would help the audience understand the feeling of being pulled out of a dream at the last second.
Thanks for letting me know, though! I love having people help fix any errors I may have made.
And I noticed you followed me. Thanks so much!
5278348 No problem. ^-^ Can't wait until next chapter.