Prince of the Night, novice writer, Master Arcanist, Aspect of the Moon. Does not appreciate being called 'Prince Moonbutt', but further detests being referred to as 'Prince Inkbutt'.
This story is a sequel to One Moon
After finally meeting, Prince Artemis and Princess Luna now have to discover how they reached each other, and what truly occurred that fateful night. As they investigate how their two worlds are connected, however, they find that isn't the only connection they have formed.
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Congratulations on the story's first chapter completion :D
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Thank you, it was a long time in the making. The second chapter is coming along nicely, but don't expect it too soon. It takes a long time to write these chapters.
This is gonig to be fun
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Just wait for the next chapter!
That was good. I loved this chapter. I wonder what is next. I wonder will Dusk and Twilight get crushes on each other as well?
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That is still up to debate. Some think that opposites attract, and somepony as scatterbrained and intellectual may be more into a strong stable pony, but maybe Dusk could be that way. Or he could over-think it and ruin his chances. In fact, both of them may over-think it, and cancel each other out and work great together. Nopony knows until that sequel is written.
5378910 Sequel? As in this story or a sequel to this story?
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Yes.
5382274 YES!!!!
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Perhaps.
Oh, why do I have a feeling that this note will pop up somewhere
5684835 Well, he crumpled it up and threw if away... Let's just hope that he thinks to take out the trash before any errant eyes land on it.
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Oh now, that would be the easy way out. Luna comes to visit, she looks at the different letters and sees that...
5684950 ANY errant eyes... devious older brothers can be quite invasive. As can well-intentioned but uncontrollably curious friends.
5685116 Oh yeah, that's going to bite Arty in the butt in the end
5685120 We shall see... (but probably yes.)
5685122 to quote you.
this pleases me.
Great job. I love the depth of the emotions in this chapter. I can't wait to see what happens when Luna and Artemis meet again.
5686344 Thank you.
I just found this today, and have finished both chapters, I cannot tell you how happy I am that you made a sequel, cuz when the other one ended, I about lost it! XD
anyways, I like where the story is going. I also enjoy how each character is believable, and not just thrown together like a melting pot. Other than a few VERY SLIGHT errors, and I do mean very slight, everything seemed pretty good in the grammar department.
Keep up the good work and I look forward to another chapter whenever you get around to it! :)
5789431 Your praise is appreciated, and believe me, I too would enjoy abother chapter.
Just found this the other day and this story is shaping up to be just as good as the prequel. Please tell me this project will continue.
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/*poking with a stick*/
Is it dead?
6973467 Eh? Who has disturbed my slumber?
6974916 RIGHT. THAT IS WHAT I FORGOT TO DO.
I lost this story for a bit and an now back. I am very glad I found it again, and with two new chapters to boot! I'm liking where the story is heading, and am starting to slowly figure out each character a bit more. Different than my head cannons I believe but I like seeing that, as it gives me a new perspective on things. I personally can't recall seeing any grammatical errors worth mentioning so good job there.
To summarize: I really like the story, very few errors (if any), and I will patiently await the next chapter. Great work!
make more
7031423 Two more chapters not enough for you? My quill is fraying, and my inkwell is emptying as fast as I can fill it. Patience provides perfection.
sorry i just love the story. so much
man I'm a prick and I love it hahahahahaha
7143456 Oh Brother...
Just finished One Moon and loved it. I will definitely read this one as well.
(But not right now as of posting this comment, because it is 3:30 AM and I stayed up this late just to finish reading One Moon. It was that good in my opinion!)
7282989 I am glad you enjoyed my tale so much, and what better use of my night is there than paying respect to its Lord and his works?
Gosh darn it! I did it again! It's 2:24 AM in the morning, and it ends up being one of your stories I'm reading before I go to sleep!
(Not that I'm complaining about that).
By the way I busted out laughing when I read what Artemis wrote in that one letter.
"Hey baby,
You and me, a couple of bottles of my finest champagne, and nopony around to hear us..."
You really know how to balance out the serious and light hearted elements in your story.
Just finished the 4th chapter, and I am excited for what comes next!
Well this is shaping up to be rather interesting. Keep up the good work
Glad to see this continuing. The story that took place before this "One Moon" and now "Lunar Convergence" are some of my favorite stories.
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Hearing that warms my heart, thank you. I promise more is coming, but patience is always an indispensable asset.
I read that “hay baby” comment five days ago. I stopped laughing yesterday.
WHAT THE FUCK MAN!
In sure given that their counterparts to eachother their equal in terms of power.
Wow, 6 years later, it's complete! Nice! 😁