This story is a sequel to Hearth Warming Sunset
Side Story to "Love's Light: Is it Possible to Love Again?"
"Is something wrong, darling?"
"I.... I don't know. I have this feeling that something's on the horizon, and it's big." Sunset said, looking off into the setting sun.
They say during times of peace, if great tragedy is to come, the archmage will have a premonition about it. Little did Archmage Sunset know, that is exactly what this feeling was.
Bahamut, the ruthless king of Drakonia, the land of dragons, has decided something that could change the entire fate of Equestria.
"My subjects hear me now. Thousands of years ago Discord came and overpowered us all. Now we dragons shall go, to reclaim our former glory. To show Equestria, who is the strongest. To show all, that we are the mightiest of them all!"
War. Pain. Death. These are what become of his decision. Can Equestria stand up to the strength of the dragons? All of Equestria must now fight to protect the ones they love.
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This story takes place thirty years before "Love's Light: Is it Possible to Love Again?" but it is not required to read either before the other.
Edited by Tschloken
elmago02 was my Counselor and helped me out with Idea's. Cover Art also made by him.
Will add more characters as story progresses.
I hope you all enjoy this Side Story.
"Kinda" doesn't seem like something Celestia would say, it's canon name (I think) is Carousel Boutique, it could use a sprinkling of commas, and it doesn't seem to have the heart that LL does. That being said, it's a fantastic concept. No one does this ship, and of course I live for that. But you gotta watch that execution, or you won't get the results you wanted.
Nevertheless, you have my support.
5484764 Actually... Carousel Emporium is in Canterlot when she moved she changed its name to fit the city... Also Dragon Wars is a Less Romancey Story then "Is it Possible to Love Again?" while it will have some romance in it... the Romance is not the main point. Also please note, Celestia during that part is speaking not as a Princess but as Sunsets friend and a lot of ponies/people like her would change how they speak when talking Formally
This could use another proofreading pass. And some format corrections. Sure, it's interesting, but it's almost unreadable. It isn't that it's not enjoyable, but it needs help.
5528053 mind explaining?
5529655 for instance, it's difficult to differentiate between your character's thoughts and dialogue, with the only difference being between ' and ". Most authors use italics to do the job. If you'd like, I can do a more detailed editing tomorrow once my laptop's charged.
5529955 I use Italics for flashbacks, thats why I use ' and " for thoughts and speech... beyond that though... what else seems to be the problem
5530380 that's the only problem I really see with the formatting, at least at first glance. You can also use breaks ([ hr]) or even quotes for flashbacks, and that'll just make it look cleaner. I'll PM you with mechanical corrections tomorrow.
This sounds interesting...
5848311 i hope youll enjoy the story, and hope youll read the other storys of "Love's Light".