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Diamond Tiara has always been forced to endure experiences that would break an average pony. But it was not until she realized her anger failed to help her that she was able to truly conquer the terrors that plagued her life. Diamond Tiara's back story. Basically, I wrote this story because Diamond Tiara is woefully underrated and hated, two words that should never be associated with any pony. I hope that this look of Diamond Tiara's unknown childhood and adulthood explains and helps you to sympathize, love, and tolerate her, as I have. It is also an outlook on the future on Ponyville, and the creation of a new Mane Six, composed of Apple Bloom, Sweetie Belle, Scootaloo, Pipsqueak, Dinky, and of course, Diamond Tiara. Finally, this idea has been ignited by the Deviantart image known as The New Elements of Harmony by musapan.

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Comments ( 28 )

Apple Bloom isn't vermillion. Vermillion means red.

Oops :twilightblush:! Sorry, I now know NOT to automatically assume that Pokemon cities equal a certain color (Vermillion = electricity = yellow).

I changed the color from vermillion to yellow and more chapters will be coming soon. Diamond Tiara won't be loved by everypony if I do nothing, will she?

WOW Tiara wasn't a brat in all her life:pinkiegasp::unsuresweetie:

want to see how she corrects the bat parts of her life

Has potential, keep going!

Thanks for all of the support, everypony! Next chapter should be coming tonight!

Something based on my favorite fanart? The picture that I wished somebody would write about for weeks?
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@Equestrian Deadpool: Really? That's so :rainbowkiss: ! I'm so glad you like the source of the concept so much! And don't you worry, the other ponies should be appearing once Diamond has reached 5th grade. Please keep reading, as there will be more to come!

wow:pinkiegasp:man
so that started the Diamond Tiara that we all know
still waiting to see what made her to change

till then suffer CMC!:applecry:

wow things are heating up lets see how Applebloom survives this

Well, I FINALLY got to reading this, and I have one complaint. The narrative in this chapter was a little confusing. It switches from Author to Reporter without any warning and left me quite confused. (The way you worded it, I thought that you would be going from Author to Diamond Tiara, but I was disoriented when I found out it was Author > Reporter > Diamond Tiara.)

Eh, for the most part, I'll use the first chapter excuse for this. Believe me, it gets much better from here on. And, don't worry, I did just fix it, so I'll be sure to take your comment into account for future chapters! Thank you for your review, because I do really enjoy your input!

wow this filly is getting it hard, but it seems that the loss of her mother only made her worse (Season 2 episodes)

WHAT WILL CHANGE THAT BRAT?

NNNNNNOOOOOOOO!!! :raritydespair: SHE'S TURNING TO THE DARK SIDE!

*Transformation complete* :fluttershysad:

Eeeehhh... I think I like Screwball better, she made it through an entire scene without pissing somebody off. Still sucks for Diamond though...

An entire hospital gives any kind of service, much less surgery, to a minor without parental consent? Yeah, bullshit. That threw me out of the loop so hard I banged my head on the ceiling.

Credit where credit's due, you're doing an amazing job delving into Diamond Tiara's mind. That said, a lot of the factors leading to her fall from grace are pretty one-dimensional--her mom, for example, seems to be callous simply for callousness' sake.

Just a technical point, a house would only have one butler, even if it were really large. The butler's job is to basically "manage" all the other staff in taking care of the house and to keep the key to the wine cellar. (There's also the housekeeper, whose exact duties I forget, but who was more or less the equal of the butler.) What you probably have in mind is footmen, the male servants who serve dinner and so on. :pinkiehappy:

Anyway, interesting story so far!

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Really? I never knew that! Thanks for telling me! I'll be sure to fix it! I do have a head butler, but I never knew there was a term for the butlers who were not the heads! Anyway, I'll glad you're becoming intrigued by my story, and I'll be sure to fix it soon! Please keep reading, as I believe it does get better! :twilightsmile:

hm... not really enjoying the first person format and you really need to make teh shift from authors note to story visual in some way. A break, italics, something... it looks really bad when reading and suddenly a few words into the next sentence to realize it's not part of the story :facehoof: The concept is interesting but admittedly I'm more skimming then reading at this point do to the format :twilightsheepish: seeing where your going with it. I'm willing to give it a couple more chapters to grab though so we'll see.

I think I'll be stopping here... I am admittedly curious for the future and redeeming her but I'm skimming so much now that it's not really fair to the author here. I just can't get into the Narative, whcih is a shame but cause I love the concept... between the first person formating and some of the narative choices I keep finding myself pulled out of the story. :fluttercry: sorry.

Interesting story so far good job:pinkiecrazy:

Pow right in the kisser:rainbowlaugh:

I was really hoping this story would tell how she gained a element of harmony. Oh well

I was told this story was related to a new EoH but even so it was good, may I suggest a sequel reaching how she was reformed and why she is famous.

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