Well, I love parties, don't you and I adore chocolate! It has so much delicious creamy, chocolatey goodness. oh, and did I mention I love the word 'Cascade', it sounds so weird cas-cade, so awesome!
When Princess Celestia sends Twilight an old spell and Pinkie Pie drops some of Zecora's magic brew. You know what's going to happen! All of the mane 6 are going to be transported to another world where they are cats, Warrior Cats! They have to turn into carnivores and have to complete the prophecy! Simple as Pie. Or Muffins!!! 
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Clogged her throat
Finally Twilight opened
Not bad either way. Good idea and a good first story too.
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I shall take your comments on board
ok, I will say this, your book has a lot of potential of being the best Warrior crossorver I have ever read. just get your self a good editor and you have your self a really good book.
then, WHY ARE THEY HAVEING A NAMEING CEREMONY! that is saying that they are part of the clan, that is not how bluestar would have done this. she should have been a bit more carful, than just say "ok, you strangers can be apart of my clan"
Firepaw was accepted because of the prophecy, and most of the other cats still didn't want him there.
I am sorry but plese fix this, so far this is the best warrior cat crossover I have ever seen, I want to like it I really do.
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I shall take your comments on board and try to make it a better story. I know that Bluestar doesn't roll that way, just saying "Okay total strangers you are now apprentices" but I didn't know how to start it. I made the prophecy up so the reason the mane 6 are accepted in the clan. I am going to introduce Sandpaw and Dustpaw in and they are make sure they know they are not welcome. I will try to make it clearer, and once again I am very sorry!
I stated in chapter 5 that there was a prophecy about the mane 6. That is why Spottedleaf went into Bluestars den before the naming ceremony . I am sorry, I should have made it clearer!
i had an old cat OC named Hawkshadow, origionally he was three shades of brown with amber eyes, now he's black and 2 shades of brown, it won't bother me if he's included
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Can you tell me what clan he is in
5547440 Normally it would be Thunderclan, but I occasionally have him as part of Riverclan.
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I shall make him part of Riverclan!
(Imagine me saluting you)
5548444 lol
You know it!
A Warriors/MLP crossover. Huh. I remember loving Warriors, haven't read the books in forever though. Gonna give this story a try and from what I've read in the comments the only problem is the need of an editor.
YES! first time I get an OC included in a story, I believe... other than that, I rate this chapter as a
out of 10
just out of curiosity, when will AJ and Hawk... y'know... get down and dirty?
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I mean if that's alright with you.
Remember they are just apprentices
this is an everypony rated story, and I shall base it like the actual Warrior Cats books!
5650313
But it is a romance so they will have some close scenes
5653025 tis fine with us.
After MMC (you know which episode.) That was written in size=100
Lionheart: why are you letting loners enter our clan!?
Bluestar: because fuck you that's why!
Lionheart:...
Bluestar:
Not sure if I'm too late but I have an OC for consideration.
Name: Darkfang.
Age: 26 moons.
Clan: whatever fits the story.
Personality: not fond of rogues, generally happy and slightly outgoing, mostly introverted.
Coloration: Jet black, eyes are greenish-blue.
typical stance: secretive, but accepting.
I won't feel offended if he never shows, or he is slightly altered.
If he makes it, it have fun.
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I shall try to put him in Shadowclan, with a speaking role!
oh my gosh WARRIORS!!!!!
Hi there! I noticed your story and I just wanted to say that I'm working on something really similar to this. I'm new here so I don't know If this means “idea-stealing,” but I don't want to do that. Can I have your permission or work on a warrior/MLP crossover? I'd really appreciate it since I love her books. *Squee!*
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Also you're welcome to writing a warrior/mlp crossover! It's your own story, just remember to add a disclaimer, to say that you don't own the warrior cats series but are only using it in your own plot. Than you're golden! I shall await your great story! (Imagine me saluting you!) 
I love the warrior cats series as well!
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Do you love Warrior Cats, I love Warrior cats, we all love warrior cats!
This looks promising......
There are just a few errors here and there that need to be fixed. Keep up the good work!
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I shall correct any grammar/spelling mistakes.
Just wondering , where are the mistakes?
Is it too late to submit my oc?
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It's fine, you can still submit. I just have another story going on, on a different website, which means I won't be updating any time soon. But when I have finished my other story, I could put your OC in.
You know, if you need an editor I can help.
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If I do update i'll send you the next chapter for you to edit
5535910 it is good, sorry for taking so long to respond, I am lazy, also the website didn't show you.
I thank you for taking notice, and I am very sorry for sounding like a jerk back then.
like I said, I like your story and I think it has potential, with a few clichés that got real annoying really fast.
still I like the idea and I am hoping this will be the crowning achievement.
P.S. I am planning to bet ya to it.
Something i noticed in a lot of warrior pony stories is that, the clans quickly welcome them which i'm very confused about Firestar was never welcomed as much as the ponies in the stories [also i didn't read it yet i'm just pointing it out]
pretty good story you got here winter. I shall give you a
5534850 I agree with you most of the warrior cats and MLP cross overs I have read welcomed them , never any doubt...
I don't know if it's too late for OC's but here's mine
Name: Sharpthorn
Clan:Shadowclan
Sharpthorn is a black and white she-cat with a sharp scar across her eye, she is kind of stubborn and bitter but she can be nice sometimes.
Okay, I'm going to be a little harsh with you. Wouldn't a pink or purple or blue cat stand out? Like really stand out?The Clans are fairly superstitious and I somehow doubt they would welcome cats who are too weird. I don't mean to be harsh since I am writing a Warriors story too, but I really don't like it when writers dump pony colors into cats. This does not work since they need to hunt and fight and this just puts them in a huge disadvantage. Please take this into consideration. Also, I noticed a whole lot of grammatical errors. Please fix. These are examples:
New idea, new quote. Also,proper punctuation and capitalization is missing in a whole lot of places. We are talking specifically about the cat Opalescence, not the gemstone or whatever.
Same thing here.
And there is more but, I really hope you will find them yourself. Sorry, I'm just not a very good mistake finder.
Other than that, very good story idea.
wow this story is realy good plz keep up work good
So many commas
PLZ BE DISCORD!!
Me: WE DON'T NEED MORE F O R B I D D E N R E L A T I O N S H I P S D A M M I T
This is starting in the first book isn't it?
Name: Thornclaw
Age: 27 moons
Personality: serious, harsh, doesn't take crap from anyone, loyal to his clan
Coloration: dark crimson fur with black tips on his ears, tail, and paws, icy blue eyes
Clan: Shadow clan
Being a scheming two timing traitor.