After the events of A Royal Canterlot Wedding part 1, Twilight feels horrific. Having pushed away her brother, her friends, and even Princess Celestia over her ridiculous claims that Cadence was somehow evil, Twilight, in her sadness and loneliness, thinks to throw away the most valuble of Celestia's gifts ... her life.
But, never one to pass up an opportunity for some good mayhem, Discord offers another prize instead ... to see what would happen if Twilight was never born.
(An homage to the classic "It's a Wonderful Life")
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Good premise, but just a bit short. It could be greatly expanded.
and this is the reason why celestia wants to refom Discord and give him a second Chance ^^
I saw this in the new stories list recently and thought it could be a great story to keep track of. Instead we have a short one shot that barely delves into any particular scene.
What you've written is good, I just was hoping for something longer.
If I were to put a number on it, to the extent that such numbers can be meaningful, I'd say I thought the story should have been 10 thousand to 15 thousand words, give or take.
Good, but could've been longer.
I think true, it could've gone longer, but I find it funny that twilight was happy her leg was... bleeding....
Indeed. A wonderful life.
Thankyou for this story.
Good for what it is, but definitely too short.
In accordance with popular request, I will be writing an extended version. I may post it as a sequel depending on how fimfiction's system works.
It is on a short side, did your story take place where Twilight considered suicide even after rescuing the real Cadance?
Discord ended up saving Twi’s life from a decision that could leave not only would of taken her life, but destroyed her friends’ lives as they realized that they caused this and would harbor the pain of losing their friend.