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Hm. This should get interesting.
I get the feeling this is why Trevor keeps waking up half dead, on the edge of a railing in his Y-fronts
tracking for the comedic aspect
I shall try this spell now... Luna?
Luna: yes?
(Casts spell)
Luna: (eyes glaze)
You will present your plot to the next being you see that isn't me
Luna: I will present my plot to the next being I see that isn't you.
When I say Charlie, you will slumber
Luna: when you say Charlie I will slumber
Charlie, how do you feel?
Luna: fine, why?
Here comes derpy
Luna: (presents plot) ... Does my plot look bigger than when we met? I am thinking about trying to remove a pinch of fat and collagen for cosmetic reasons... And I find my butt-fat and the like a good fire starter... Well?
Derpy: (stuck) wooks fihne to meef
Ponies, so fun to play with
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Your comment made me laugh so hard!
I think you meant shorts here.
Well, first chapter, nice grab at the beginning. I'm trying to comment on how I felt the first time I read this for each chapter. The main thing I remember is how one line tugged on my heart. "So why did it feel like her heart had been stepped on?"
I think that line made me decide to keep reading, even though the MC theme didn't appeal to me.
Well, this certainly looks interesting.
6424612 :o The abyss is reading this~? <3 oh you naughty pony *boop* :3
Starting off innocently enough, but it's clear things are going to escalate, just the way I like it.
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nice oc!
(Of course not, Applejack. I tried it out and nothing at all happened to me. See, I'm still-)
(AAAAAHH! I'm purple! The charm turned me purple!)
(Aw, C'mon Twi. There's no need ta make fun of me, what with you bein' purple all along.)
(What?! Oh my Celestia, it's worse than I thought! The charm altered history, so that I retroactively have always been purple! AAAAAAAHHHHH!)
(Wha…? Twilight, are ya sayin' you remember not bein' purple before?)
(No, I remember being purple my entire life — but have I always been purple before I cast the charm??)
(Buh… Guh…)
8735149 Yup, this was totally intentional.
Purple pone gon have some fun
Comment written by someone that has read up to Jan 2019:
Coming back to the first chapter after reading all of this and "Friendship is Mind Control: Consequences" is wild. What an amazing journey you took us on. Thank you
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But with no way to remove it fully a wrongfully accused person could be a puppet for someone. And that not right. At least twilight tried to let her friends be themselves.
I love this... And I'm looking forward to more~.