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Princess Luna's Hearth's Warming Eve went terribly. Full of flattery, last minute gifts, and an obligation to open a party for the Royal Guard, Luna just wants to lay back down in bed. However, the main event of the party is Vinyl Scratch, and the DJ wants to make sure that everypony has a good time. That includes Princess Luna.
Can Vinyl rekindle Princess Luna's holiday spirit? Or will the holiday turn into a nightmare?
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Cute, and the perfect blend of fluffy and hardcore.
Wow, this is really good. Can I; perhaps, convince you to do a sequel?
That was very nice.
Well this was pretty awesome. Thank you for writing. I always love insightful Scratch.
5448905 I agree. This needs more. I need more. Let's go!
great story!
As written, this would have made more sense without the Romance tag and the out-of-nowhere kiss at the end. I was wondering all story long about when any romance would actually show up, and to be honest it really didn't, at least not from my perspective. The conversation in the bedroom felt like the beginning of a friendship rather than a romantic relationship.
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I understand that. I kinda wanted to make it ambiguous, and go with a theme that perhaps wasn't caught the first time around.
Please write a sequal please?
I'm just ignoring the random kiss at the end. I couldn't care less if this wasn't a romance story. Honestly, remove that element and the fic is largely the same.
What do I take issue with? There are too many complete jerkfaces in this. I can understand the guards berng afraid of Princess Luna, but it's unbelievable for them to be so casually rude in front of her. She's the co-ruler of the country and I'd expect them to be marginally respectful. They aren't, so the story is hard to believe.
There's some goods stuff here, and I especially like Luna and Vinyl's conversation towards the end, but it's not executed all that well.