A man is found beaten to death. The weapon appears to be...hooves? The Equestrian Royal Intelligence Service cooperates with human law enforcement to solve the murder.
MLP crosses over with NCIS.
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Lookin' good.
I was in the middle of reading this when all of a sudden the N.C.I.S theme comes on. I was like:
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Well... having read enough science fiction and Star Trek... yeah if we can we will... Anywho... Good start
So the 'specialists' are none other than the Mane 6? *didn't check the character list earlier*
DAMN! DAT TWIST!
Damn cliffhangers/commercials. I hate waiting.
I still feel like all of the Mane 6 leaving their day jobs (or hobbies) to go wonder how people died is a bit contrived, but I'm looking forward to see this story conclude.
Is there gibbs?
Calling it now, Joyce is a pony.
Welp, so much for my Joyce theory!
Hehe. I like. Keep up the good work!
Hmn, that ending, maybe my Joyce theory wasn't so far off after all...
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That was great.
I just sort of assumed that the relative dose of the medicine went up when he was turned into a much smaller creature.
But today I learned to never piss off the moron who gives me potentially lethal meds.
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DNA matching the Green pony to Wheeler would've been impossible. Changing species would be the same as rewriting genetic code, the DNA wouldn't even be human and therefor could not provide any match. Even if you argued "It was a spell so the change was only superficial" the hair sample would have reverted after the spell ended.
Other than that, it was really good, the only thing I can say is that there was too little character interaction. Everything seemed to fly by much too quickly because you're going from Point A to Point B at maximum speed. The story is good but the pacing is too fast.
>My colleges can help.
wat
RACIST
Yes. Sequel please.
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No offense of course
She and Abby toasted each other with large-size cups of Caf-Pow energy drink.
NO! WHAT HAVE YOU DONE
this is really cool!
I'm loving the fact that ponies are just part of every day life there. It's kinda cool
569611 This is why it's okay to do that:
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It's colleagues, not colleges.
This is great so far.
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Lady Killer - Priestess
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Mr. Bean makes everything better.
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The mane 6 seemed a tad too, erm... technical (?) in the way they spoke. The character attributes showed through very well, but at the same time I found it a bit difficult to imagine them talking like investigative officers.
That aside, though... the story is pretty damn good. I love me a bit of NCIS, and this fic read a lot like an episode would in book form.
Thumbs turned skyward for you my good sir.
570244 Pinkie pie then went in insane mode and thought everyone was candy, thus eating them all. THE OTHER END
Holy Guacamole! Snapshot murder coverup! It becomes more awesome by the sentence!
The awesomeness is exceeded! WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! TELL ME NOW!
And now, derpy reacts.
Now Pinkie Pie...
Rarity:
Me:ohinternet.com/Awesome
Good story, from start to finish. A bit fast paced, but kept me interested to the end!
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Turned Abby and Pinkie into hyperactive maniacs!
Great story, from start to finish.
Now I want a CSI crossover dammit!
You really can settle a situation. After reading this I had the sound and the effects of the "flashforwards that happen often in the series.
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Thanks.
Say, have I seen you around before? Does your username happen to have anything to do with a particular Plymouth?
“Well, that’s a step further than don’t-ask-don’t-tell”...
YEAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
570196 LAWL, inorite?
But we still never found out what Tony's problem was with ponies...
...or do i just need to watch NCIS to get it?
NCISxMLP FTELW DOOD!!!!
581950 It's there in the story. His girlfriend broke up with him over a pony movie.
584228 I aim to please.
Gee, ya think Dinozzo?
Gibbs, if you would?
(slap to the back of Tony's head)
Thank you.
Dude, you rock so hard for making a crossover story like this!
Though I can't believe you turned Tony into a racist.
For shame.
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I think that would actually be "speciesist"