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Banana Prince


I used to write exclusively about dragons and thought unicorns were lame. Now I write about ponies. Life can be funny sometimes.

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It's the third day moonrise in Canterlot High.
Sunset Shimmer has all of the power, but still hasn't gotten a clue. She steps through the portal to Equestria, thinking she's got it all figured out, but quickly finds out that's not the case.

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This was brilliant. Very nice job.

Woah...that was good. Plus, I found it quite hilarious. :rainbowlaugh:
Rock on.
-ThePortalPonies

Pretty much this.

Ri2

Yeah, I kind of thought the same thing, honestly.

Sunset's right up their With Ambrose Burnside and General Westmoreland as a tactical genius!

:rainbowlaugh: Ohmygoshican'tthinkstraightnow... XD

<Edit> Okay, re-read... Thinking straight is easier now...

Um, what happened to Snips and Snails? Did they go poof between Sunset confronting Twilight?

Ah well. You know what? I think we need at least one story where the plan actually works^^

And yes, I think it could.

Well, that's one of the more comedic ways her plan could go wrong.

My imaginings tend to involve less humor, but I prefer this.

Oh geez, that was hilarious.:rainbowlaugh: You need more rating than you have, by the way.

I can imagine this being an episode of How It Should Have Ended.

Perfectly plausible alternate aftermath.

This made me smile today.

:pinkiehappy:

If that's what happened if Sunset went through with her plan, I'm glad Equestria Girls ended the way it did. This is funny stuff.

Like I said, this was a well written explanation of one of the MANY possible outcomes that doesn't involve Celestia incinerating Sunset and her "troops". Well done.

I take it, that those who seen the movie would get the joke.

This was funny because I've seen the movie.

Classic villain blunder: having a plan that is liable to fail even if it weren't for the heroes.

"High school sucked anyways."

HAHAHAHAHA!! I-*WHEEZE* CANT BREATH! HAHAHA!!!

It'd be funny if they went back to CHS and posted that on YouTube. :rainbowlaugh:

Aw, poor Baconhair... but this is just too funny! :rainbowkiss:

And get some chairs, a camera, and an air mattress…

You forgot popcorn. :raritywink:

5780625 Believe it or not, I actually considered that, but I thought that it would make the ending a little predictable.

A royal guard off in the corner walked up to one of the hypnotised ponies and gently gave him a shove

Cap.
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Oh that'd be going full karma circle. And as much as I love Shimmy Shakes, I think that'd be funny as hell.

That was a good story.

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