• Member Since 18th Jan, 2013
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Darknight293


Comments ( 6 )

Amazing Dude:pinkiehappy:

I would love a continuation.
Please?
Pretty, pretty please? With a cherry on top? :twilightblush:

Pretty good, but it seems to me you're having trouble deciding between what tense to write in. You can't keep switching back and forth, you can only have one or the other.

Aside from that, good fic. :twilightsmile:

5609213
Perhaps...we'll see.

5609715
Yeah, it appears to be the one thing I can't solve.

Wow! This was amazing! To think you made this all from a drawing is awesome! For your first mature piece, it turned out wonderfully! :heart:

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