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GrizzlytheMedic
I put out fires, write stories, other fun stuff in between too~
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That was… quick.
Best trigger warnings ever...
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Please keep going with the story there are not any derpy stories like this and I fucking love it. Please keep going and if you can make them just a little longer please.
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If you read my other stories, I'm not one for long chapters but I'll see what I can do.
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I know I was just thinking maybe like 1,500 to 2,000or 2,500
I need more!
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Duley noted! I'll have another chapter out soon hopefully. I don't have a date but I'd say maybe within the next week.
Loved it. There's not enough love given to good ol' Ditsy.
Keep up the good work, mate!
5607826 I had to "define" the black text since I was on mobile. Something was funny about that.
Define "cuddle muffin"
Daww :3
Honestly, I think it might be best to leave it as a one-shot. It seems to have the quick pace of a one, and I'm not sure how you'd really continue it after hitting pretty much everything in enough detail!
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Oh trust me, I can build off of it. Just read some of my other stories.
Ok, I need to address this. This is an issue on previous stories of mine as well. Whoever is leaving a downvote on every single positive comment. Fuck you. I work hard and if people like my work, they have every right to leave a comment and say so. Stop being a debby downer.
Hey hey loved the story track and a favourite just one thing:
other than that good work :D
"She hopped up onto the couch and waited for Andrew to lay back before climbing up onto his chest and nuzzling into him."
Might want to take a look at that one again
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Thanks, I'll get on that! Next chapter is in the works!
i liked this a lot. im always a sucker for sweet fics, especially the ones with derpy in it. why the sad tag though? you got something planned for it?
anyways i like it very much. gifsec.com/wp-content/uploads/2014/03/yes-gif.gif
THE FEEEEEEEEELS!!!!!!!!!!
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I figured you'd like it Dibs.
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Idk why but I can't get into Luna lament. And also bon boys lament still wasn't finished...or it ends in an odd way anyway...
I like to imagine that ,when word first gets around, Taylor is enjoying a sandwich with Bon Bon and responds with this.i3.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/original/000/539/302/a33.gif
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Nope, its not finished yet. I've had midterms and other shit to do. Also, I have writer's block.
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Ahh. Yeah writers block sux...if I could stick to a story and not lose it, I could make some great ones.
Good drama
Romance
Action (in more ways than 1
But I can't focus on it enough...damn my ADHD...damn it to hell!!!!!!!!
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Welcome to the club
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Yours is light, and you can go back and forth at least.
Me? I have thought of 60 different fic ideas and made 2-3 2000 word chapters easy but I lose my focus and go t another one...but I could never REALLY write (or type) it out...I lose it faster, and I rethink things many different ways. I can't focus on one story line, I make a story WEB!!!!
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Way to get me right away. What I do is I type it whenever an idea strikes me so I don't lose it. Or just find a piece of paper and scribble it down while you're on the toilet like me.
Megusta
PLEASE MORE!!!!!!!!
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Glad you enjoy it!
Damn you, Dinky! Why you gotta be so adorable! My heart can only take so much!
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Then have a set of defibrillators on hoof because it only gets cuter from here.
5614396 Any brony that knows his stuff has one and plenty of insulin on hand. I'll endure.
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Not all. I have nothing for health, and life preservation. Except for bandages...well "band-aids" that is...
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You and your ability to create the feels...you are gonna kill me, I swear that you are...
5616647 Then you might want to get those before your heart explodes from the daww.
you write such things pretty good. (what i try to say with my poor english is, that there are some scenes i don´t like, but you make it pretty enjoyable?! for me.
Normally i would like to know a bit about them befor they start the romance, but since i know Derpy more or less (because i don´know your Derpy), i can see she is nice and she is acting pretty average i guess, and i still have to learn about your Human here, but even he seems to be nice enough.
Long story short, i think i like both of your characters, and even if i prefer a slowly development in their relationship, i like it how you do it too.
I would like it if the story would have a slower pace, but since you already started this way, i guess i prefer it like this.
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I totally see what you mean. As with most of my stories, quick romance, more details come to light, plot twist ensues, profit, etc.
Encore!
“That was the most amazing sex I’ve ever had!” Derpy panted. "and we only needed two minutes"
I don´t know, the first time that i got the feeling, they probably not even were busy for more then one or two minutes.
okay i allready hate that Sparkling, i am not sure how to describe it, but even withouth her calling him fat, she seems to be pretty mean, i honestly don´t want to tell anyone what they should like and what not, but the part with her was pretty weird for me.
I haven´t seen much clopfics here, and i prefer them with a bit more story in it (not just the clop), but this was probably not the best clopscene. Sorry i don´t want to be mean, but i don´t know how to say it otherwise, this chapter was not my favourite.
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I get it. Thanks for the feedback! I'll work on that the next time there is a clop scene, I usually write better smut but I'll probably edit it when I get a chance.
Awwwwwkwaaaaaaaarrrrrrrrrrd... ( ._.)
Also, nice connection between two stories, even though the chapter to the other was just done recently
MEGUSTA PLEASE KEEP GOING!!!!!
YYYYEEEEEAAAAAHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!
That was cute, can't wait to read the other chapter now! :D
I loved it! Could you, maybe, add more "details" to these "scenes" please?
This is pretty good. The pacing is a little fast but its still good,
Also, Sparkler says: "and a fat human too!"
How fat is Calvin?
1-10
1 being kinda chubby to 10 being Obese?
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Like me around a 4-5 ish range
5630316 Oh. Ok. Though, maybe he could lose weight throughout the story? That would help you with continuing the story! ( You know, because Calvin is eating healthier due to the fact that he can't eat meat in equestria, considering it would be a crime against Pony kind.)
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way to spoil it
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She took that well. I would want to bleach my eye's out if I saw my mom in the through s of passion.
Well, that escalated... none, actually. She was full throttle from the get go. I wonder how accepted that is in Equestria.
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Run Calvin Run!