Ever since Celestia woke up, prank after prank has occurred in the castle with her as the target! Needless to say she's had enough and intends to have some choice words with her husband about it. But is he really to blame?
All OC's in this story belong to Kilala97.
Co-written with The Avenger.
So much funny, I just wish it were longer (or there was an extended version).
Aw, man! I was gonna do this one!
BWAHAHA!! I bucking loved this. :D
Okay this was hilarious!!! XD Great job!
Best punishment ever
Boeing traped whith your girlfriend
Hello! Sunlight Blaze here with my second review of the day! Another one-shot story by Alphamon_Ouryuken. This one looks to be more comedy-focused. Let's see how this goes down.
(Don't forget me!)
Nope. Not happening, Hades! Not this time! Go on! Shoo!
(Well, aren't you a party pooper...)
There we go....Now, let's get into "Out-Pranking the Prankster King!"
WARNING: The following may contain sarcastic, serious, joking, thoughtful, or downright unnecessary commentary and/or flutter-censored swearing. Viewer discretion is advised.
So we open this up with Princess Luna in Canterlot Castle after a long day of meetings. She's on her way to the bathroom when suddenly...
Luna bolts to the bathroom to find...Celestia apparently taking a Jello bath? Okay, that's just random enough to be hilarious! (Humor: +1)
Darnit, Discord! ("Darnit Discord" counter: 1)
So we change scenes to Discord in his little pocket dimension.
....Well, that was pointless.....
So Celestia is walking through the castle looking for Discord, when suddenly--
...........Can we get an appearance description for this guy? If he's Luna's lover, I imagine he'd be a pretty important character. And he's trying to contain a wingboner (I cannot believe I just said that).
Darnit, Discord! (Count: 2)
Celestia dismisses Supernova before getting rid of the picture in her own way.
Darnit, Discord! (count: 3)
We flash back to Discord in his pocket dimension laughing at a Power Ponies comic and....wait, what? Wasn't he just.....Wow, nothing makes sense with this guy.
Suddenly, he remembers he had a picnic with Fluttershy and snaps away. Well, at least he'll be away from the castle and unable to cause trouble there..... the fk am I saying? He can still do it from the other side of the world!
Back to Celestia, she's taking care of those chocolate rain clouds in the throne and Luna is chasing her daughter, who is bouncing on a flying jelly bean. WHAT!?!?
Question!
1. Who is Supernova!?
2. When did he and Luna get together!?
3. When did Celestia and Discord get married!?
4. WHEN IN TARTARUS DOES THIS STORY TAKE PLACE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
My goodness, the only thing that makes sense about his story right now is the fact that it doesn't make sense! And that's only a valid defense because Discord's in it! I'm not sure whether to call it a positive or a negative, but DANG!!!
Okay, I can answer the fourth question with some degree of accuracy: in some strange alternate universe or in the relatively distant future past what may eventually become season 7 of the show. Okay, moving on!
After the jelly bean explodes into apple juice, Celestia gets an idea: Fluttershy should know where Discord is.
Apparently, you, Princess Luna.
So we get to Ponyville Park. Discord pops in and Fluttershy isn't at all angry at his apparent tardiness.
Wait....What.....Why......How.........
WHO!!! IS!!!! THE!!!!! FATHER!!!!!!!
Would THIS be an accurate representation?
I know Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned, but THIS is ridiculous!
So Celestia lays down the accusations, and Discord...calmly denies he had any part in it, even going so far as to steal Rarity's fainting couch (Humor: +5).
So Celestia sifts through Discord's memories and finds....absolutely none of the pranks.
Well, I guess my "Darnit Discord" counter goes out the window. *Tosses it out the window*
(BUT WE HAD SUCH GOOD MEMORIES TOGETHER!!!)
So we flash back to the castle to find a mysterious figure getting ready to plant ANOTHER prank on Celestia in her own bedroom.
Well, that is one dead kid---Wait....WHAT!?!?!?
So, this is Prince Illusion. I'd assume, since Discord is the father, he'd be a draconequus/pony hybrid or something...but no description is given..... What, are these famous fanmade characters that apparently everypony should know about?
Okay, let me do a quick google search.......
(Some "music" for the wait....don't worry, it didn't take me literally half an hour to find what I was looking for.)
Okay, so all of these characters who made me go
In order of appearance:
-Supernova, a batpony OC married to Princess Luna
-Nidra, a batpony alicorn who is the daughter of Supernova and Luna
-Turquoise Blitz, a dragon/pony hybrid born from Rarity and Spike
-and here we have Prince Illusion, the child of Discord and Princess Celestia.
And apparently there's a few other "next generation" characters, all of which (including these) were created by deviantart user kilala97....and I failed to check the description of the story for the disclaimer....
WOW, I suck at my job.....
Okay, how the heck can you get more random than that!? (Humor: +5)
So Illusion FAILS to teleport away and is left by Discord to face the full fury of his mother.
Turns out Illusion has been practicing his reality-warping powers and was essentially using his mother as a test subject. And by successfully making it look like they were bonafide Discord tricks, he's improved quite a bit!
But all children need discipline when they misbehave.
Oh dear, what could she possibly have in store for him!?
This is Crystal Clarity, another SpikeXRarity child. And BOY, she is peeved at Illusion!
AAAAND apparently she's a little on the sadistic side!
(Oh dear.......that is my kind of child!)
GO HOME, HADES!!!!!
So....what happened the last Hearts and Hooves day?
(one viewing later)
(Sunlight....what are you doing in the Underworld?)
too........ *gasp*....... funny..... *gasp*........ comic....... *gasp*....... story.......*gasp*........ combined........*gasp*......... fuuuuuuuu *faints*
(Oh, poo......Well, I guess I'll need to replicate his body again and transfer his soul into it.....Seriously, Sunlight; you owe me for this one.)
And that's Out-Pranking the Prankster King. And......WOW, that was a ride!
This felt almost like "Return of Harmony" all over again! Trust me, that's hard to emulate, and somehow it worked out really well here!
There's really not much to the story; kid pranks mom and blames dad, dad sets things straight, mom punishes kid. And the fact that the kid is a chaotic demigod really makes it even more fun to read through, and I imagine it was a blast to write!
As I know next to nothing about ANY of kilala97's OCs, I can just say I enjoyed those who appeared on screen. A lot of understandable explosions from Celestia; we all know everyone has their limits. There were a few grammatical errors, but they didn't detract from the comedy, which was the sol purpose of the story.
Speaking of which, this story is fking hilarious!!! Right from the word go, there's something going on that made me laugh! The jello-bath, the flank picture, the chaos-ridden throne room, Discord's innocence, and Illusion's punishment, all drove me up the wall laughing! And it all ties together, now that I know - generally - who each of these characters are, though the fact that I had to google the characters to do this is a bit of a letdown.
Moral of the story, kids: Don't mess with Mother!
Karma is one thing that I always enjoy in comedy stories, and I'd say the young prince got his and got it good!
Looking for laughs? Here's your stop! I know I liked it!
Sunlight Blaze's ratings:
Story: C (7.6)
Writing: B (8.5)
Humor: A+ (perfect 10)
Moral: N/A
Ending: A (9.4)
Personal Enjoyment: A (9.7)
Overall: A- (9.05)
I'm Sunlight Blaze---
(Ahem.)
....and I owe the God of the Dead a huge favor..... Okay, what'll it be?
(*whispers something in ear*)
No......
(Hmhmhmhmhmhahahahahaha!!!)
No!
(Oh yes!)
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!
Awesome job love Killala97's oc think you more then did them justice I'll be sure to re read this whenever I need a good laugh