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Babs Seed is a seed. And seeds can't fly. Babs know this, but she can't help but dreaming about the day, when she learn to fly and show everypony. She'll show them how much she is worth, through flying out and away, through becoming somepony. She know she can, she just need to have faith and strive forward, strive upwards.
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As a side note, I'm pretty sure the other character's name is supposed to be Heart Throb. There's no "e" at the end of it.
For the actual story, I will say that I very much enjoyed it. There needs to be more Babs-centric stories on the site. Well done.
5645108
I had a 'e' at the end? I'll fix that!
Great you enjoy it! :)
Brilliant. It's a very powerful story and I think one of the best I have read.
5645196
Aww, thanks! What was it that made it so strong, if I can ask?
5645212
Partly because of first-person, but mostly because of the way you wrote it. Because if I summed it up the easy way it would sound like this: Babs made a friend. But you wrote it and kept comparing Babs to an actual seed in a real world situation, and it sounds much more powerful then where Bab's was lonely and wanted a friend. IDK, but that was a powerful story and I liked it. Good job.
5645212 That was a wonderful story Keam
5645514
Okay, thanks! Also, cool avatar.
5646219
Thanks, my friend (and master)!
Pretty good :P
5648049
Thanks! :P
Nice story, love the bit in the schoolhouse, but... is that Supposed to Be Heart Throb, the G1 Pegasus of love?
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Glad you like it. To be honest, it's an OC lag early based off the G1 pony if love sharing the same name, which is a personal favourite of mine along side Fizzy.
Good story.
5657593
Thanis! :)
This was, touching. I enjoy stories like this. some of my favorite. there were several grammatical errors, but they were easy to pass over, so nothing hard to read. but all in all, yeah, beautiful story. Thank you for writing it, I'm glad I had the opportunity to read it
5664437
I'm very glad you enjoyed the story. The grammar mistakes would of course be there, but I'm glad it didn't take away from the story.
BABS SEED SINGS
"(Everyone Would Know) SEEDS DO FLY"
the theme from the Keam production
"Seeds can't fly"
A Paramount Release
Music and Additional lyrics by Babs Seed and Apple Bloom
Chorus by Daffodil Spark
As heard in the Paramount single "Seeds Do Fly"/"Finding Love", Paramount PAA-0015, and in the Original Soundtrack Recording of the Keam Production/Paramount Release Seeds Can't Fly, PAS-5017.
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Oh, how I wished I had wings to fly!
A flying seed...
that would show them what I'm worth.
I'd fly away and never come back...
and everyone would know,
that seeds do fly!
I wished that I would fly away from here
And that I would sail
right down to the Heaven they promised me!
I'd go there and see all the lovely little sights
and let everyone know
that seeds do fly!
It's lonely when you find yourself in a dark, lonely town
and find that you have nobody else around
But I'll find the way up in the sky
and there in flight I will be bound!
How I wished I had wings to fly!
A flying seed...
that would show them what I'm worth.
I'd fly away and never come back...
and everyone would know,
that seeds do fly!
[instrumental break]
But I'll find the way up in the sky
and there in flight I will be bound!
How I wished I had wings to fly!
A flying seed...
that would show them what I'm worth.
I'd fly away and never come back...
and everyone would know,
that seeds do fly!
5833849
This... this really touched my heart ever so lightly...
Despite a few grammar errors and problems, this story was pretty beauiful even if she wished to fly.
Seeds can't fly, but you can grow them and they can rise. It feels as if as they rise they're flying towards high to the heavens. Growing and blossoming into great wonders.
That's Babs Seed throughout this one-shot. She's now going to rise and find herself rising throughout the heavens as she learns something lovely at the end of this story.
As her and Heart Throb's dreams are connected and will blossom into lovely friendship.
You did amazing with this lovely one-shot
5852737
Thank you. This is one of the few of my own fanfics I enjoy reading, too. When writing this, I put my self as Babs Seed, and used the writing to ease my fears about things waiting for me in the future.
5852737 It's even greater now that it has a great song. Look at my earlier comment in order to see the song.
5860904
I've already read it when I wrote mine. It's very lovely.
I hope someone on Youtube will do a cover on it or something.
: , D
AARGH! Hasbro blew your little story to bits on today's episode of MLP:FiM! See this forum for details!
5878717 I won't look at that until I've seen the episode. Not Amerocan, remember?
5878717 saw the episode. And no, it did not. I never stated if she had/didn't had her cutiemark, nore what it was
5881148 I should have specified its title. The episode that aired yesterday in North America was titled "Bloom and Gloom." It is on YouTube.
5881335 yeah, I know, I watched it today
I KNOW WHO DID THE COVER ART! IT WAS ME AND I CAN SEND YOU THE PM FOR CONFIRMATION! :D I'm so glad I found the story because I really wanted to read it. LETS READ THIS ADVENTURE
5945564 YAY! :D I'M SO SORRY I LOST YOUR PM!!
5945961 Naw it's fine.
5945985
Thanks. If search function of fimfiction for PM weren't mupped up, i may would've found it. Also, please tell me what you think when you're finished
How sweet. The ending seemed quite short and cut off, but whatever. It was nice.
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Yeah, I'm not good at ending things akways, I know. None the less, glad you liked it.