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There is a room, that's always changing. In the room, is a door, that does not change. Outside the door is a thousand other doors, to a thousand other rooms. Those rooms are empty, but not this room. She's here, and probably always be, because there is no end to her excistance, or this always changing room. and as long as there is a room for her to excist in, she will exsist.
Written for the writing competition in Harmonists Inc.
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Welp. You definitely fit the impossible part of the prompt, and more than most.
I promised a review to all submissions that come in, but I'll only be able to give that after the end of the contest, for obvious reasons. Until then, feel free to change stuff if you want to, of course.
Thanks for submitting!
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Yeah, that's what I thought...
I understand...
No problem, it was fun! Nut now you need to promise to let Bilbo go! :(
interesting.
Nice. Deep, dark, and scary, but a nice read.
If you'd like, I could volunteer as your editor. I could see some grammatical errors that needed fixing up.
Other than that, it was... Weird. In the sense that you put a lot of description into it, so it was almost like I was there with her as she was explaining all this. Which would mean I would be dead too, and I don't want that...
Anyways, it was good, and as I said, if you would like me to be your editor, let me know and I can fix your story up proper.
*reads the story*
You gave the story a very, realistic feeling.
I don't know what competition this was for, though I think I can safely say that you pulled this off very well...
(I'm not at commenting, alright?)
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Okay...
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Then it was as intended.
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The meaning was that you'd feel that you were there. Also, I'd love if you could help me edit this! :) do think there is any possibility you could be finished with editing before the 28th? This is for a competition that ends when all of the world enter March, so it would be good with editing before that.
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I can have it done by the end of the day if you'd like.
5665686 img.thesun.co.uk/aidemitlum/archive/01635/SNF10HOBB3_1635195a.jpg
He's free. Hostage released.
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Thanks...I hope it'll go good for me! :)
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As long as it's before the 28th, it'll be good. Thanks for offering! :D
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I wanted it to be very much feelings, and it was certainly good practice for me! :)
5665802 Well, I certianly was feeling it!
Very well done.
Though...I guess it could have been longer. But still, the pacing was wonderful!
5665777 Actually, at 1 o'clock GMT on the 1st of march, if you want an EXACT deadline. Because reasons that are complicated, and also Nukualofa.
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Yeah...I guess you could make it longer, and maybe I will...but I think it's good length.
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Okay then.
5665816 Yeah, its not a bad length. It was spaced out nicely. To increase it would just make it at least 20% more cooler!
Still! a 9 out of 10!
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:D
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Hmmmm the was awesome.
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This is a great story.
I will put it in a category of the group Pony Connections called "One Shot Head Cannon" because of implied relationships with other ponies within the story.
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:D
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Implied relationship?
I'm glade we meet on that on blog
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What?
5666039 oh wait sorry we meet when commenting on Darkbeard story and was talking about hunting the haters
5666013 The implication of this relationship comes in the following:
1. The main character (as well as the only character who has a speaking role) refers to Bluebelle as her aunt.
2. The main character (as well as the only character who has a speaking role) lists herself as being part of a group of siblings.
that was a great story thanks for the read and thank willowhisper for me
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Oh yeah, I see...though of all of thise, Bluebelle is probably the only one alive
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No problem! :)
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Yeah, exactly.
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:)
Wow, this story was neat! I loved it!
This was so creepy, but awesome! This story is gonna stick with me for a long time.
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Thanks! I'm glad to see that you liked it.
The review I promised is here!
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Thanks! :D
5729671 You're welcome. I did promise, after all.
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Yes you did! :)