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'Bout time, eh?
Srsly tho... where's the Irish pone clop?
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Probably in about six chapters or so...
I will always love that sketch.
Yes! Update! and a good one it was, hope to see more from you soon.
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There's a reason it's a classic.
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Thanks! I'm looking forward to writing future chapters.
I'm very sure that Celestia has Faran staying in a rental home near a hospital for no other reason. I'm also sure it's because of other medical needs.
I know. It's so crazy that it might even be true.
Only until they admit their true feelings for each other and fuck.
You don't even get paid. That will later turn into laid after running into a kind pegasus.
Then Derren just gave up.
I should probably let her down easy.
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Damn it.
Yeah, because there isn't another reason why you want to be there. Everyone knows about your true feelings for Derren. You just need to admit them.
Yeah, because we all know what you're really wanting to learn about, Twilight.
At least you beat your parents to that already, Twilight.
I guess Tirek used a class six fireball.
I approve.
Still approve.
Splendiferous!
Next mayor Ford reference.
Well, that was properly adorable as expected, although it really left me wondering how he managed to not hug and/or pet Twilight at any point in this chapter with how cute she was being. That said, it did feel like you might be pushing a bit hard for a relationship there with some of the details which felt kinda fast to me so I would seriously consider toning it down a bit in the future to let things grow more naturally.
Also, since he can apparently get the Music of Harmony to fire off musical numbers on command now, he should really abuse it to start up songs that have no business in Equestria. I'm thinking Sabaton.
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I saw this and I was like: "I see what you did there you cheeky bastard..."
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Yeah, that's kind of been a struggle of mine this whole fic. But if you think I'm rushing it now, you should've seen the first draft of the scene with Faran.
And I wouldn't say he can command the Music of Harmony. After all, it has a will of its own, too.
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Yay! Someone got the reference!
My father told me when I was just a child.
Never unleash your imagination while walking to school. The worst thing will happen. And he's right. I was middle of Nowhere. cost 2 days to get back home. cry like a little girl.
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What? Sperm samples are totally legit medical needs!
Who told you that?!
Shhhhh! Spoilers!
Maybe not a kind pegasus, per se, but certainly a yellow one with a reputation for brutal honesty and a short fuse.
Or he channels JonTron:
Inorite? That's a Weapon of Mass Adorableness.
It's gonna take a while to wear her down, though. That's some weapons-grade denial she's packing.
It's just a matter of time...
You could say she was doing a preemptive strike.
The best Derren's imaginary underlings could do was ill-tempered mutant sea bass.
Oh, no. Tirek's fireballs go up to eleven.
I should hope so.
Old as fuck.
so i guess the magic of harmony is affecting him because his new body is made from 100% equestrian matter and that at some point we will be seeing other changes on him?
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The ability to be affected by the Music of Harmony is basically going to be the extent of it. He won't be hitting Gary Stu-ish levels of power, if that's what you're worried about.
lol
nuther lol
6429806 not worried, just checking the extent of the magic influence on him, kind of bored of the i can use magic now HiE's, and good call on him not being a gary stu, on another note are the visions going to happen again?
P.S. you will do ok as long he doesn't become the seventh element of harmony
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Good gravy! Seventh Element of Harmony?
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Not letting that cliche anywhere near this fic!
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Glad I could make you laugh.
6429835 that one has its own special place on hell next to the black and red alicorn oc
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I really was wanting more explanation and world building with the "back home" conversation but I guess ill wait for more
Geez..magic of harmony.. That'd be annoying as hell. Much to the point where if it was me I'd keep my mind blank forever
Harmonic Field Thingy: OMG LOOK AT ALL THESE NEW SONGS I HAVE TO TRY THEM OUT EEEEEEEEEE!
6429447 Fair enough, just keep an eye on it and ask your editors to keep a close watch for relationships moving too fast.
As for the Music of Harmony, I think this requires some experimentation. There are just so many absurd and/or horrifying songs he could try to start musicals with, and the magic will drag others into the insanity for some absolutely hilarious scenes. The really funny thing is that for all the stories that do crazy things with music that has no business in Equestria, I can't think of any that used this kind of mechanism to turn them into musical numbers.
I know the solution to avoid the music of harmony. Carry around a sousaphone, or some other bass instrument, and when you feel the music start up, blare on it like there's no tomorrow!
Compliments on the Blazing Saddles reference.
I scrolled down upon seeing the words "Cosmic castaway" to say that I was reminded of the movie Titan AE.
*scrolls back up to read more* AND IT'S GOOD!!
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So, that's two votes for getting Derren to somehow screw with the Music of Harmony.
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Umm, the reference was in the previous "chapter," but thanks for noticing it anyway.
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Yep, that's what I was going for.
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There are stories out there that pulled off the cliché,... Otherwise it probably wouldn't be a cliché
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Well it did get established that it has some sort of will, probably has a sense of humour as well.
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Derren's not doing much better at handling it.
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Maaaaaaaaaaaaybe...
(And yeah, I've seen the "Seventh Element of Harmony" bit used well, but all too often, it's crappy wish-fulfillment hooey.)
What's this? An Abbott & Costello reference in a MLP fic? Oh happiest of days!
Love the running gag with the Music of Harmony. I think you'll get a lot of mileage from it.
Great chapter
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Thanks!
6430759 What can I say, screwing with things to see what happens is part of human nature. That is basically the foundation of science and engineering right there so you should respect the urge to fuck with shit to harass your characters. Heck, it doesn't even have to be deliberate, he could just get reminded of something wildly inappropriate which gets him thinking about it which gets him thinking about how terrible it would be if it started playing which gets him thinking about it more and then the magic kicks in to troll the shit out of everyone and it will be glorious. Twilight's reaction should be especially funny if Spike is involved, although they will all be fun.
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No problem, Jimbo. Always happy to compliment good writing when I see it.
Y'know, despite having read dozens of Human-centric fics, I've only just noticed something a few minutes ago.
Is it some fort of unwritten rule of MLP fan fic writers that Twi and the human OC have to engage in snark-to-snark combat at some point in the story?
Guess there's something about the purple pony princess that brings out the wiseass in everyone.
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Or it trolls him by not activating when he consciously tries to have it activate.
Probably shouldn't have it get too troll-y with him, though, otherwise the "Planetary Will" will start seeming like Discord.
6431494 That sounds like a plot point to me.
love this chapter really good.
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Thanks.
Music of harmony huh? So you're going with harmony actually being a metaphysical force rather an abstract concept? Intriguing, well there's some inspiration to work with.
Also I want to say that Darren and Farren are fighting like an old married couple. I bet someone has already said that too.
6428900 Seriously? Dude be patient it happen at the right time.
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Yeah, I figured it'd be a good way to explain why ponies keep bursting out into random musical numbers.
There's going to be a fair bit more to it than that, but this is one of the side effects.
And yeah, Dash at the very least has noticed the belligerent sexual tension between Derren and Faran, even if they haven't yet.
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I'd figured that, and I have been working on a similar set of ideas myself. Although the music thing never crossed my mind to honest, I just never thought about it.
Yes the word clueless is one that applies really well here as near as I can tell.
6429806 We'll...see...about...that. He better not turn into a Gary Stu disease.
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I finally got around to reading this chapter and I laughed so hard I broke out into an incredibly painful coughing fit.
10/10 wish I could like and favorite it again
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Don't die on us from laughing too hard!
6431742 ... It's kind of an inside joke.
6433642 Well that does make sense Biker. Besides I was only messing with a bit, that why this was present.
Two things: one cool little star trek:ENT reference there and two is thisuniverse working exactly like a musical and only "main chacters" get songs or is there going to be an off handed remark about derren being pulled into a musical number about wrapping sweets by bon bon and lyra?
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I probably won't be limiting musical numbers to just the Mane 6. I mean, hell, Flitter got pulled into a number about Derren's problems, so anything's possible.
(Also, I'm glad that someone noticed the Star Trek: Enterprise reference. )