It's over. That's what Octavia had said to Vinyl Scratch. Nevermore would she feel the warmth of her lover's lips upon hers...but she would feel the cold sensation of the whiskey bottle instead.
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wow
5728064 Is that a good wow, a bad wow..? o.o
5728070 a very very good wow. it's a sad but moving story and if i'm right you based it off of 'whiskey lullaby' a touching song. i liked it very much.
5728079 Indeed I did as the author's note says :3 I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Wow powerful stuff here
Nothing like a good dose of depression to start my day.
damn powerful
It's a nice idea, but it could have been more
Wait. Why is Vinyl being buried near Futtershy's house? Wouldn't that creep the pegasus out a little?, knowing there's a body buried just outside her abode?
5730491 I probably should have wrote "in the area near Fluttershy's" because its near the Everfree.
5730551 But...WHY there anyways? Surely you have a better place in mind to bury a famous DJ? I mean, it sounds more like just putting her near the forest and forget about her to me. Perhaps if you created a proper graveyard in your story it wouldn't be too big a deal to me. I mean I like this story, and the ending is just, 'Holy shit repeating cycle!' good, but I don't think you might have thought the burial for Vinyl Scratch out very well. If you gave a reason why she was to be buried near the Everfree it would make sense. Like, tell us if it was a special place for her and Octavia or something like that. But don't feel down. I like this story. It proves that a good story doesn't need hundreds of thousands of words, just enough to convey the message. I've even given this a Like
5730717 Thanks and don't worry, I can take criticism as long as its constructive xD
Listening to Whiskey Lullaby before reading had a major affect on the power of this story, Well done.
5731163 Everyone is entitled to their opinion.
5730911 Criticism? No it's not. it's truth and honesty.
5734731 And it is also a sense.
5736529 Sense of taste?
Like there is sense of smell and hearing?
5736997 There, you see?
Now, if you will excuse me, my friend, I've an intro animation to make for my YouTube channel. Please consider looking me up on YouTube. My channel may not be the best you'll see on the internet, but I'm trying my best at least.
5737295 I'm sorry?
This hit home for me, as I find myself blaming myself for my wife's death quite a bit, and for a time considered Vinyl's route. (long story)
Amazing and heart wrenching stuff. Thanks for sharing...
Read this while listening to "Whiskey Lullaby."
If your not crying afterwards, (or dearing) You, my good sir, (or madam) are heartless, and not the good kind. (Kingdom Hearts)
Dude, heavy.