It's Mother's Day in Ponyville, and Dinky has a very special present for her mother.
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I realize that by the time this goes up, Mother's Day may already be over, but I tried to get it up in time!
Whoa, you're spewing out dem stories.
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Beautiful. So much dawwwww.
This was very touching. Nicely done.
D'AAAWWWWWWWWWW!!!!
, and then i went 
, and then I went 
. Pretty good range, I think.
First it made me go
I Give it five staches
D'aww. Derpy is best mommy.
Beautiful. Simply beautiful.
D'awwwww!
Let me guess "parlement of dreams"?
I absolutely loved it
I actually cried! Best fic ever.
Derpy is best mommy and Dinky is best Daughter.
That line about her eyes is one of the most touching things ever. awesome fic
589719 That I am...time to go a little easy for now though. I got big stuff planned, and it's gotta be good.
*cue super D'AWWWWWWWWWWWW face*
I wasn't in the mood to cry, otherwise I would've. :P
D'awww that was sweet. I love these stories with Derpy and Dinky.
Great story mate. Colour me impressed. Wait I need a Sean Connery to go with that line hahahaha
Yes, these are manly tears that I shed.
I did that one time to my little bro and after i found out i felt like shit
D'aaaawwwwww.
I cant belive I cried
But that was amazing
Not a single dislike DERPYDASH
"And yea, we wept, when we remembered Mother's Day." [citation needed]
Aw crap. Now I feel bad. All I did for Mother's Day was 60 bucks and a hug. I'm a bad son.
absolutely lovely little tale here. very heartwarming.
Very cute.
Nawww! ;w;
Cute! I love Derpy and Dinky stories.
5 out of 5 derps.
I loved it! Such a great story
I love Derpy and Dinky stories. They make me want to cry from happiness.
Yeah, I cried. It was very touching and sweet. Great story!
Beautiful. Your mastery of the mindset of a foal is exquisite.
so much D'aaaaawwwwww
This is so fluffy my heart is going to burst. I love this.
Oh, this is so good. As you may know, I don't give out faves lightly, but this was so short yet sweet and it was perfect. I know the story is a little old, but still, great job.
[EDIT] Heh, I just realized that Mother's Day is tomorrow. Pretty cool coincidence.
TOO... MUCH... DAAAW
-Hotwingsrule
591162 You mean liquid pride.
I can't not say enough how beautiful this is. Oh my god, I nearly cried and I don't do that easily.
So help me, I really liked this.
Normally I split my reviews into three sections: premise, characters, and plot. However, since this story is so short and with only two characters I think I'll do a condensed version.
Wow when I first clicked on this I thought it was going to be a standard, Dinky tries to give her mom the best Mother's Day ever but screw everything up only to have Derpy say that no matter what happened it was still the best Mother's Day ever. *takes a deep breath* But I am pleasantly surprised by the way it went. You didn't even need to go through the entire day. It's debatable but I think the time span for this story was no more than an hour, if less. So to have it be so emotional and happy is pretty good.
Yet just making everything happy and fun wouldn't make it as good a work as it truly is. Instead you begin with Derpy yelling at Dinky like an actual mother- something that I haven't seen anyone else do. This adds a certain realism as Derpy would yell at Dinky sometimes, even if it wasn't on purpose or was a mistake; like in this story. But even more is the naivete of Dinky when confronted by all of the underlying "bad" that is being revealed throughout the chapter. When you think about it we learn that Dinky's classmates were making fun of her mother and Derpy got fired from her job and has no idea what to do- yet because of Dinky's naivete we see it as she does, thus making it bitter sweet.
And that would be the best way to describe this piece of work- bitter sweet. So sad yet happy you can't help but tear up and not know if it's from sadness of happiness that despite everything that goes on through their life, Derpy and Dinky still have each other.
FINAL GRADE: A+
F
ing adorable. 
Hey there! I haven't read this story yet, I will though, but I just wanted to say congratulation on getting ranked number 1 without having any dislikes. It's a wonderful feeling to have, and I should know as it happened to one of my stories too.
This hit me hard. You did a terrific job with it; writing from a child's perspective is a very difficult thing to do well.
I listened to DRWolf001's reading, you might consider linking it in the description.
And THAT is how you do family interaction!
Very sweet.
I ALMOST shed a tear, Very Sweet story
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Me too! Very sweet story indeed!
That one person who disliked this story has no soul. How do you dislike something this cute and adorable?!
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Easy... your crying(joy or saddness) so hard you can’t see the like button and mess up but never notice
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That or they're from Australia!