Pinkie Pie had decided to throw a large party, as she normally would, not for anything in particular. She Invited her friends, Spike, and the CMC. The night would be great and festive; with cakes, balloons, confetti, and...blood?
Someone at the party was a murderer but no one could ever imagine any of themselves as one, but the events pointed to that one fact. Someone had blood on their hands.
This story was inspired by "And Then There Were None" by Agatha Christie. And I hope to write more literature inspired stories like this. Perhaps you all can suggest some and I can put them into consideration.
Tu gratias.
Chapters (5)
And then there were none.
I just finished reading that book! Good read!
Well shit that cant be good. Now its time to wait and see who really is doing it. Not gonna say its pinkie because that would be too obvious XD
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I don't know dude, you might be surprised
Well paced and exciting, looking fonward to the next update.
Ya....I guess Rainbow Dash was more dumber then I thought XD
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Suse I like how your putting those shades on the spoilers, thats awesome!
Not bad so far. A few spelling and grammar errors but other than that pretty good.
I'll PM my guess and if I'm right, I get to post one video.
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What do you mean post one video?
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You'll find out
And with that, the pretty one goes away
RD's face had to be bluer than usual.
5948585 This is human remember
5951165 So..... Not technicolor?
5955793 exactly
5958863 Well, you didn't quite make that clear.
Please oh god please continue this story! It's the most awesome thing I've ever read and I mean it! Please continue it!!!!!
(note: before reading)
This is a Ten Little Sailors / And Then There Was One thing isn't it?
I'm not sure how much I'll like it, but I think it will be a lot
And right away before even looking at the first word, I think I know who the killer is (-->
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You'll have to stick around to find out XD
shouldn't it be five - what with Fluttershy still in the kitchen (also noticed it at end of last chapter)
6092547 half way through I'm thought it might actually be
It's nearly always the one you least expect... and who could think Flutters as a murder?
so my guess it's either
or 
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Thank you for the correction
So grey hair, access to herbs and knows how to use magic. Sounds like it could be Zecora.
Oh and all the rhyming, definitely the rhyming.
6093070 Oh shit man that is very cool what you did there, but no, She wasn't even at the party and no one can get in or out.
6095843 Yeah but whos to say there isnt someone else in the house before the enchantments?
Wow...
just wow...
I don't know what to say...
I did not expect them to be the murder - but that shows how good of one they are (i guess)
I guessed correctly. I don't know whether to be happy or upset.
I wonder who is the killer?
Wait a minute. If Twilight wasn't the killer, wouldn't she be afraid to like the sparkly stuff?
6637338 I guess XD
I will say the motivation behind the action works but it did need a bit more time.
6641483 Yeah I know it needed more time to flush things out, but I couldn't think of anyway to keep it going without everyone going insane, even the original material was a tad rushed but worked better because the characters didn't know each other. However that's not the case here.
Hi if u want stories i know a few gd ones but id reccomand the night angel trilogy its good
Oh... I really enjoyed ATTWN... I must give this story a read.
To the super long read it later list of mine this goes. I will definitely make time for this one.
P.S. Shouldn't this have a mystery tag?
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Thank you for your interest! Also it is a now a mystery
6993246 I'll have to give that a read sometime, thank you for the suggestion
6561048 Be proud, at the end ATTWN I threw my book because it didn't give a clear answer
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It’s based heavily on the poem in the Agatha Christie story And Then There Were None