I write stories when I get bored. Sometimes I finish them.
Steve Rodgers, aka Captain America, has died in battle against the forces of the Chitauri. After his death, One-Above-All came to him with an offer too good to refuse: Live on in a new, peaceful world as its greatest protector. With a new body and a new opportunity, Steve becomes the greatest soldier in Equestria.
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The one above all else didnt say exslesero
Loved the Stan Lee guest appearance! I also am sad he did not get his catch phrase in but I got a feeling he will be back. This story has real promise as it stars the best superhero in the business! So well we get an Elements Assemble call in this fic?
5936962 Without a doubt, my friend. Without a doubt.
5936845 Yeah. That was a bit of a mess up on my end.
My bad.
5936985 its ok.
Can't get the Captain America the First Avenger theme music out of my head now.
5937170 Sorry 'bout that.
5937259 No harm done, I wore a Captain America mask all yesterday since I saw Avengers age of Ultron.
More. Not a command, a fact. More chapters, and soon. I like this.
This is really interesting. Noticed a few typos, but nothing major. Have a like an a tracking.
The typos go...
"Now don't you be loosing you voice on me.
your
Theirs something I want to talk to you about."
there is
And I also think you're life was cut
your
"I'm glade you said that."
Glad
He was and earth pony.
an
Glade was funny, because I find that one in my own work a lot. I also have ore for or far too often. Sneaky E there.
.....Please. Ser.
Can I have another?
This is awesome
Definitely liking what I read so far. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Hmm, Ol' Steve Rogers in Equestria, this just got awesome
5938550 Opsie-Poopsie!
Thanks for pointing those out!
Aap.
is that a abbreviation for something? a typo? (its in the 8th paragraph after the jump to equestria)
Writing felt a bit rushed, but still a gud story.
Keep it coming, too many stories die early these days
Language Cap'!
I hope you keep working on this story.
Good start.
Pacing is smooth.
Conversations are a bit off, but passable.
Grammar, structure, etc. is mostly right.
Avengers/MLP crossover (I'm hoping for someone to 'sense' that Cap is still alive, but I'll be fine with where the story goes.)
More.
There will be more.
Or nothing will stop the dislike train.
<- Favorite Superhero is Captain America.
<- Grabs popcorn.
LOL, loved those parts.
I require more chapters
Really would love to see more of this please!
There just aren't enough cap stories on here and since he's one of my favorite characters in fiction, it would be nice.
5940571 this is going to get good. I just know it. Keep it up, and you'll become my new favorite.
I am a reader! Now and forever I shall read this story until the end!
5941547 I ... kund hope that shows up in the story.
Are you going to update? This is a great story.
Captain MURICA!
When's the next chapter coming?
5941547 I'M SORRY, SOMEPONY DOESN'T KNOW AMERICA?! AM I GONNA HAVE TO LEARN YOU SOME AMERICA YOU COMMIE SCUM?!
A Captain America in Equestria story? Color me intrigued. Off to a good start and I hope to see more soon.
when are you posting the next chapter
A Cap in Equetria story? You have my intrest
Is this going to get updated?
witch version of cap's shield will be used?
will it be the comic shield or the movie shield?
also keep up the good work!
I think the classic heater shaped shield would be a great cutey mark for the Cap. in fact i think the same for the shield itself. lets go one step farther and make it a Wankel shaped shield.
5940571 When do you expect to be done with the next chapter?
Did this die the moment it started?
Edit 28/12/2017: Yeah I think it died
Edit 3/5/2019: yep, definitely dead
It been a year or two but when will this story continue.
Ded
It started and then died.
When is the next update?
Hello, will we ever see this story continued?