I saw this updated in my mail and was like , and clicked and as it loaded I saw it said "spoilers" and I was like "dang, it's not a chapter." And then it loaded and it was a chapter and I was happy.
6666568 'Spoilers' as a title was more about Tamara's willingness to lay out her story, her entire story, for somebody.
Really hoping I got this one right. As a lady's lady, I've never had that kind of experience with a guy, so... yeah.
I think I have a buried line in an earlier chapter, or one of the unused drafts, where the main character says she wouldn't sleep with a male in a hundred years, so... eighty is close enough?
can't wait to see what you add to the Xenophilia lore. as far as the explicit material goes i give you 8.75 on romantic and a 7 on clop. very good scores in my book it was a lovely scene. next time try and hold the build up portion of the the scene a bit longer. you had basically two clop scene that were a bit too short by themselves. hope that helps.
I plan on punching you all in the feels. Your feels, they will ache.
Spare us thine punches to the feels.
If Master Winter perishes in the coming storm it would be dreadfully tear wrenching; we are all just coming to be so fond of him and his sad back story.
6666766 Thanks! Frankly, for as many drafts as I tended to do on these chapters, I've done even more so far on the next story. A little more explicit -since the sex isn't the point, really, in this one- and with the prerequisite delving into human versus pony mores. Basically, this story is about the world, while the next is a little more about the characters. Balancing that is my personal challenge.
6666865 i kind of figured that clop was not the point of the scene which is why i gave it the score i did. honestly i was highly impressed with how well thought out the scene was. it felt very realistic for how a pair of sentient hexapods would get each other in the mood. so kiddos on that.
6666864 Hate to say it, but considering the time period, most everybody's gonna be dead by some point. Or not... It all depends on who I want to give the 'Joss Whedon' treatment to!
I plan on punching you all in the feels. Your feels, they will ache.
Oh I've already written off Winter as doomed. He's named Winter for goodness' sake. And shagging the protagonist? And a reject from all tribes, right before demons drive the population to ultraracism? Yeah he's gonna be doing a Leonardo de Caprio impression before this winter is over. Tham'ra better watch out because she's gettin' knocked up by a stallion with a number over his head.
Alittlebit hesitant to release this one, but that's mostly just because I have less confidence in writing explicit material than anything else.
Then again, after I've finished this one, I aim to write something akin to a rather well-known story: Xenophilia. I hope to bring the same love of world-building to that one as I think I have to this one.
Of course, I still have another eighty-thousand words ofthisstory to release -already finished- and one or two chapters after that to finish things off.
I plan on punching you all in the feels. Your feels, they will ache.
I tugged off my cloak, naked as I so rarely let myself be. "Would you have me, Winter? All of me? I'm a mad witch, put together all wrong again and again, but I... I want you. Would you want me?"
I saw this updated in my mail and was like , and clicked and as it loaded I saw it said "spoilers" and I was like "dang, it's not a chapter." And then it loaded and it was a chapter and I was happy.
Edit; was not expecting that.
6666568 'Spoilers' as a title was more about Tamara's willingness to lay out her story, her entire story, for somebody.
Really hoping I got this one right. As a lady's lady, I've never had that kind of experience with a guy, so... yeah.
I think I have a buried line in an earlier chapter, or one of the unused drafts, where the main character says she wouldn't sleep with a male in a hundred years, so... eighty is close enough?
can't wait to see what you add to the Xenophilia lore. as far as the explicit material goes i give you 8.75 on romantic and a 7 on clop. very good scores in my book it was a lovely scene. next time try and hold the build up portion of the the scene a bit longer. you had basically two clop scene that were a bit too short by themselves. hope that helps.
Spare us thine punches to the feels.
If Master Winter perishes in the coming storm it would be dreadfully tear wrenching; we are all just coming to be so fond of him and his sad back story.
6666766 Thanks! Frankly, for as many drafts as I tended to do on these chapters, I've done even more so far on the next story. A little more explicit -since the sex isn't the point, really, in this one- and with the prerequisite delving into human versus pony mores. Basically, this story is about the world, while the next is a little more about the characters. Balancing that is my personal challenge.
6666865 i kind of figured that clop was not the point of the scene which is why i gave it the score i did. honestly i was highly impressed with how well thought out the scene was. it felt very realistic for how a pair of sentient hexapods would get each other in the mood. so kiddos on that.
6666864 Hate to say it, but considering the time period, most everybody's gonna be dead by some point. Or not... It all depends on who I want to give the 'Joss Whedon' treatment to!
Hmm, tall and slender moon and sun cutie mark pegacorn plus non-normal aging blank flank alien Pegasus witch....equals Tia maybe
Oh I've already written off Winter as doomed. He's named Winter for goodness' sake. And shagging the protagonist? And a reject from all tribes, right before demons drive the population to ultraracism? Yeah he's gonna be doing a Leonardo de Caprio impression before this winter is over. Tham'ra better watch out because she's gettin' knocked up by a stallion with a number over his head.
She will get pregnant, won't she?
Mmph. Those comments about feels punches make me scared for what might be coming next :(
You had me gasping from laughter here. That's the third time so far this story!
Yes.
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I have a feeling she is the mother of two particular royal pegacorns.