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In this sequel to Wrath of an Angry Prince, Spike enlists Rarity and Fluttershy to help remake Twilight's dresses that she wore as a unicorn to help remind her of the most important events in her life as part of an effort to help Twilight get over the loss of her library.
Meanwhile, Discord also joins in, determined to get on Shining Armor's good side by remaking Twilight's best mare dress.
*Special thanks to Pastelights for editing.
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Cute little story. Worthy of a fave.
I'm gonna watch dis.
certainly
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PM me when you fix this, but you need to go through this story and space your paragraphs. Way to many of your paragraphs have 0 spacing between them.
Someone still owes a debt after been saved by Spike.
Move down a line.
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Cap. [Winter Wrap Up is a holiday. All Team Organizer is the division she works in.]
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lowercase [Dress, and Costume don't get capitalized [unless they were used in a title of a publication.]
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Much better now a majority of the spacing errors were fixed ^_^.
Space bolded parts.
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hoof [equines don't have hands.]
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Alright other than your spacing issues. Not to bad of a fic. You really need to work on making sure to work on your spacing though.
Nag, nag, nag!!!
You ever feel like Spike is played of being second fiddle, a sidekick, and/or pushed around like he wasn't important in his life?
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remaking those dresses doesn't give them the same value as the ones destroyed.
6207730 At least they try their best. I wanted Twilight to get at least a piece of her life back.
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They should try and inspire her to make new memories. In the cannon they made that chandelier to reassure Twilight that she'll never forget her memories so she can let go of her pain.
Also, I would think that remaking them doesn't really do anything. Someone once stole a game of mine that was very important to me, I replaced it but that didn't help at all. You can't replace something like that and you also shouldn't try.
6342576 Ouch, I'm sorry to hear that. It's just that I read a fanfic called "It's all gone!" and Rarity offered to Twilight that she could always make her new dresses. That was what inspired me to write this fanfic to begin with. Yes, I liked that they refurbished the roots to create the chandelier, but I really liked Twilight's dresses a lot as well and I wanted to write something that addressed why they hold memories to Twilight.
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You can never replace memories, that's why they are very precious.
6342682 this was basically my equivelent of the chandelier. The remade dresses remind twilight of the important life events and like the chandelieier, inspire her to make new ones.
6342682 this was basically my equivelent of the chandelier. The remade dresses remind twilight of the important life events and like the chandelieier, inspire her to make new ones.
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They are not the same as pictures.
6342707 true, maybe they are not the same but they hold memories just as much as pictures. Take for example, twilights coronation gown, it was probably placed in a museum to remind equestria of this memorial occassion.
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yes but there are 2 differences; 1 it has value for the general public and 2 it is actual the real thing. Just like how they made the chandelier out of the remnants of the library.
They are basically copies that she can't even wear. I would think they would slightly change them so that Twilight can fit in them now and still wear.
6342752 It wouldn't be the same for Twilight if they were modified for her to wear them. However, you might have given me an idea for a future fanfic where Twilight opens up a museum about her life and places her dresses in the exhibit.
However they are not the same ones so they don't have any sentimental value anyway.
Twilight would never do something like that. She's very humble and doesn't like all the attention. Especially admiring of useless things, she wants to do something useful.
6343882 I wouldn't exactly call them useless. Those dresses are like a timeline of Twilight's accomplishments: her gala dress represents the first time she went to a big event with her friends; her best mare dress represents not just being her brother's best mare at his wedding, but also how she managed to expose Chrysalis and allow her brother and Cadence to defeat her and the Changelings, etc.
In short, each dress tells a story and holds a memory to Twilight. This is nothing more than just a head canon on how Twilight's friends attempt to get a piece of her life back. Head Canons and Show Canons are two completely different animals.
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But those dresses aren't the same ones.
I always enjoy reading this story.
I'm so happy with the way it turned out after it was all edited.
Your stories are marvelous, and I'm excited to see what you will present to us in the future <3.
Keep up the great work!
You know where to find me! :)
-Pastel
First line and i found a mistake
I think you meant Tirek there
7712550 All Fixed now.
Shining Armor: It's not tears! It's liquid pride!
Operation: restore memories is a go.
We all know that fluttershy will agree to help.
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When?
That is true.
Yikes
Shouldn’t it only be the people he’s close to?
What’s the reason he’s trying to get on shining armor’s good side, again?
What does garish mean?
When did he learn that?
I thought it already begun.
Rarity, just shut up.
If you didn’t want to release him from stone, then why did you? I don’t know about discord, but I would have clapped back.
She can do that?
That is something I’d never thought I’d hear.
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Probably still feeling bad about letting the idea of running wild with his magic turn him into a traitor. He can't help that his nature is crazy compared to everyone else nature.
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Doesn’t something bad happens if he doesn’t?
One of mu favorite things on this site is finding amazing stories like this that barely have any likes.