Twilight Sparkle is called by Princess Celestia and Luna to learn a very valuable, and unexpected lesson on being an Alicorn Princess.
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i won't lie I was hoping SO very badly that twilight would mop the floor with them.
I was expecting more of a battle with Celestia and Twilight. I have a similar idea for a fic though, but good work though. Like I said, needs a bit more battle and less talky
Twilight does seem to be the one with the knack for tactical teleportation, given the mauling she gave Tirek. Imagine if she actually trained...
6015297 well she did mop celestia in the first fight even though celestia went easy
i would of like another teleporting spirit bomb like in the tirek fight
I'd have liked if the four princesses were present in this fic, and not only three.
Great story, but it would have been better if you put it before the fight with Tirek. It would have been some explanaition as to why she was able to battle with such skill.
This is a terrific concept.
6015906 except she didn't really battle with skill against Tirek she just used overwhelming force the only skill she used was her teleportation for a sneaky dodge and in and out of the tree when it blew up.
I enjoyed this.
It reminded me of Silfoe's Royal Sketchbook:
http://36.media.tumblr.com/4527dcb7e606602f667a1e722b6e5757/tumblr_nmo0n5MKzt1u754fgo3_540.jpg
which I think would make a better cover image :P
(more from the fight scene on this page: http://royalsketchbook.tumblr.com/page/4)
Yes. I like it. I like it a lot.
So... Celestia gets the last piece of cake in the fridge?
Oh, and also...
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I applaud you, author.
This story manages to hit balance between these characters looking like they are powerful without making them too strong. Personally, I would have liked a bit more fighting, but I can see how some would think that it would have made the story too long.
you should continue this story, it has so much potential.
6048502 What do you mean by potential?
6052352 You can totally extend it into a full story about the training, or showing off how the training affected her in a real combat situation.
6052352
you have so much wiggle room for ideas and chapters for the story.
I really liked this! The idea of the princesses sparring like that is really cool!
But seriously, an excellent story. Legitimate and logical reasoning for Princess fights.
Nicely done.
Was this maybe inspired by Silfoe's/Picarto's 'Royal Sketchbook'?
36.media.tumblr.com/4527dcb7e606602f667a1e722b6e5757/tumblr_nmo0n5MKzt1u754fgo3_1280.jpg
If not, go have a look :)