Flutterbelle's Beast

ZippySqrl

ZippySqrl #1 · May 30th, 2015 · 1 · ·

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HavokAfterDark

HavokAfterDark #2 · May 30th, 2015 · 1 · ·

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Wow.

Thunder Lightning

Thunder Lightning #3 · May 30th, 2015 · · ·

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6036747 awesome childhood memories right there

Daxn

Daxn #4 · May 30th, 2015 · · ·

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and because I really liked this idea when I thought of it for the Padded Ponies collab recently.

Cuosa?

I (almost) believe it not!

Flutterpony

Flutterpony #5 · May 31st, 2015 · · ·

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6037436 This fic started out as my entry for the collab, but it got too long and I wasn't sure whether it was relevant to the collab.

GammaXai

GammaXai #6 · May 31st, 2015 · · ·

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Thank you very much for the contents warning. I was braced for it and it still gave me a bit of a panic attack.

Getting a little redundant to keep saying how much I enjoy this story but again I really enjoyed this, is it canonical to the timeline?

Flutterpony

Flutterpony #7 · May 31st, 2015 · · ·

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6037621 Thanks! I'm glad it didn't entirely drive you away. I'm working out how I might avoid that still for future readers.

It's not canonical to Fallen Angels, nope, unless Fluttershy were to write this fantasy out, fiction within fiction. If that were the case, I'd change some of the phrasing. I might still change the pretended scat play to pretended zoo play, but that might not show as effectively how devoted Sweetieshy is to Flutterbelle (oy, that's confusing).

GammaXai

GammaXai #8 · May 31st, 2015 · · ·

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6038587 I don't think there is much more to be done besides the warnings and just go at it. Trying to tone down uncomfortable topics I feel you lose all the power in a moment before it stops being gross.

At least for me zoo play would have been considerably less effective as I was expecting some.
Please don't go and change the title after I've said this but maybe I need to read less fanfiction and more books, took me longer than I'm proud of to realize Belle and Beast was a clever reference and not that the shipped pairing would be engaged in zoo play.

I really wish I had saved the link for referencing it but my panic attack is my own fault alone for years and years ago deciding to read something different and ending up with the magnum opus of scat play fanfics and only after soldiering through to the end deciding I really did not like what I had spent hours reading. Seriously more than essay but not quite a thesis on the subject.

Flutterpony

Flutterpony #9 · Jun 1st, 2015 · 1 · ·

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6041026 I know the trauma of which you speak. My interest in rape fics leads me to far fewer delightful reads than I'd like when I'm often left with one or two dead and sometimes mutilated chracters.

I considered how many might think bestiality would play into the story from the title. I like the alliteration and cleverness of it, regardless and won't change the title, but, in light of your first comment, I have unspoilered the last content warning/tag. I don't want folks to be too shocked, even if it spoils the surprise a bit.