A One Piece / My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Crossover.
This story, is a re-telling of the G1 MLP pilot episode "Rescue at Midnight Castle" with G4 ponies, several G1 MLP villains not in the original pilot, and Tony Tony Chopper from One Piece replacing Megan's role.
Takes place after the royal wedding, and before Season 3 for MLP
Also takes place after the Straw Hat's Fishman Island adventure, but before reaching Punk Hazard.
(Warning, some light Chopper X Fluttershy crossover shipping)
During one of the Straw Hat Pirate's voyages after the events of Fishman Island, a storm of the New World strikes their ship, The Thousand Sunny, and sweeps Tony Tony Chopper, the crew's reindeer doctor, overboard. He later awakens in the cottage of a yellow winged pony named Fluttershy who rescued him. Chopper discovers he's in a land called Equestria.
Little do any of the know, ancient evils long forgotten over time, threaten to plunge the land into darkness.
This story does have potencial but you seriously need a proofreader to corect your mistakes. Like in the last paragraph where you have "Chopper looks out the window, starts thinking about..." that should be like this, "Chopper looked out the window and started to think about..." Its a very common mistake that people make when writing a story. There are more throughout the story but im not about to name each off specifically.
If you want i have some free time so i could proofread your story.
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good
iam happy
well shit
you must update soon cant wait to see how this goes
dosent he have something called giant point or something like that i cant wait to see the reaction to that
also chopper is best pirate
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first: i agree, we need moar and soon
second: yeah that is when he takes a overdose on rumble pills. it gives him 3 min in that giant form
also, chopper is best pirate? silly ElijahBleu, that isn't how you spell sanji
622546 first off that was at the prision island . after the two year gap he trained enough to use giant point when ever he wants. you can see it in the manga.
second sanji must mean chopper in what ever language you speak for chopper is best pirate
yeah....wanted for 50 bellies....
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that will bring in some serious money
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ok, i decided to look into it and i saw tht we were both wrong
he can control all the special points on will but he needs to eat one rumble ball to go giant and he can control the giant form
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623233 i conceded to you facts but i wonder if he has any on him
THIS IS COMPLETELY EPIC!!!!
YOU SIR ARE A GOD FOR DOING THIS!!!!!
Oh buck.
How the hay did they get that bounty poster?!
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Dunno, he does have his bag with him so it seems likely. I mean, where else would he keep them?
The bad grammar pretty much ruined the story.
LEARN 2 PROOFREAD!
625349 oh i wonder
well shit
here we go
Aw, buck.
Those who don't know about Tirek, he's an old G1 My Little Pony villain, from the Pilot Episode "Rescue from Midnight Castle."
Yes, I had to sit through some old school ponies to get the character. And to tell the truth, G1 was surprisingly dark.
Oh man... this fic... is awesome! I'm a huge One Piece fan... I'm so faving this one! I can't wait to see what happens next!
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As soon as you threw in Tirek and anything G1 related, that's where I draw the line.
Not gonna read anymore. NOPE!
Has some nice potential here but I agree with the statement that you would need a proofreader.
Also having Celestia knowing about every mover and shaker in One Piece is a bit much. I could believe she has made Equestria unknown to the outside world and gathered intel regarding humans, much like the DC universe of Wonder Woman home region or Gorilla City (whole societies that cut off the outside world), I would buy it more if she had "sensed an aura of goodness" in Chopper rather than knowing the background of every strawhat crew member.
Wondering now if Chopper's wanted poster reward tranlates into bits?
50 berries = 2 bits.
Nice to throw in Shining Armor, part of me wanted to see if he would be to gung ho in arresting Chopper and it end up more confrontational. However, Chopper is more likely fight when it's no other alternative.
Keep it up.
At least, Chopper has slightly cleaned up his language when insulting someone who pays him a compliment. Calling Rarity a "b****" would set off a whole new story.
With all the jokes of RD's wingboners, Fluttershy might be getting one herself.
RD: Swag...
FS: Stag...
Oh my gosh... My favorite One Piece character with a world of ponies...... I must read this.....
Meh. I'll read it later.
The pointless shipping with Chopper and Fluttershy, combined with the G1 bad guys just made this unreadable.
Also, work on your fucking grammar.
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THIS IS AN AWESOME STORY!!!
Get over yourself and if you don't like it, don't read it.
Simple as that.
Dude, what the buck is your problem?
HOLY SHIT
haki actually explains pinkie sence
Good story keep it up
Huh.
What do you know that does make sense.
Awsome story!!!! SO what are going to go with chopper/fluttershy because chopper is going to have to leave or are going to make him stay?
You will give Fluttershy and Chopper a happy ending ...this we fans command thee!
690995
What if fluttershy became a pirate that would be kind of cool?
i do believe that he will leave with a special v watch that only points to equestria and come back once he acomplish his goals
691506 I was actually thinking this myself, but I'm not sure if she would leave her own friends, after all she cares for them just as much as Chopper does his. It'll be interesting to see how this story gets wrapped up.
"I am off to Ponyville, to unleash my full power. Soon, I willl build an army to take Canterlot, and then, the entire world! Even the Human World Government and their Marines, and the Four Pirate Emperors, will tremble before my might."
Umm, Hate to burst your bubble Tirek, but if you got your ass handed to you by the G1 ponies' rainbow of light, what hope do you have against Red-Haired Shanks?
Cause he'd hand you your candy ass with his one arm.
This is boss!
And explaining Fluttershy's stare with haki was actually fitting!
Good job with this story.
Write moar or you will face the wrath of the Moglin army!
*hugs the author for updating* You should feel privileged's.. Gimli doesn't hug favorite authors very often
EPIC!
SO EPIC!!!
I don't know why but I just bursted out laughing when fluttershy said she'd bring him to twilight
probably because in every fanfic when something weird happens they always turn to twi for help 
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love and tolerance man
Prepare for the biggest suitcase of whoop ass and awesomeness in the history of MLP and one Piece
I feel sorry for Tirek.
he is about to get his ass whooped.
You forgot Asura for Zoro
CAN THIS GET ANY MORE EPIC!!!!!!?????
I was hopong for choppers monster form but im glad to see a new chapter after so long
1069632
This is after the Timeskip. Zoro no longer needs it.
Again. It may be a while before I can update another chapter.
I'm currently extremely busy at work. Real life kinda takes higher priority over a fanfic.
I thank all those who have stuck with this story, and enjoyed it. (Granted I personally think I could have done better. It's the first time I'm writing a fic.)
1078895 it is one of his most powerful techniques and then why would Luffy still use Gear 3 if it is the exact same thing
The major power boost
1078963
So far, he hasn't used it in the timeskip yet.
Plus, it's also very hard to write about.
1079275
Then you shouldn't be writing this story.
Know your goddamn source material before you make yourself look like a dumbass.
It is the way the story works nine sword style is his second signature move right after oni giri