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One Harem Please


Celestia's day keeps Chaos away, but Luna's night is quite the sight

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(Thanks to Rated Ponystar for the prompt)

The Canterlot Wedding was a disaster. The Changeling Queen took the lives of Celestia, Twilight, and the bride and groom. Only Luna remains now to patch up her broken nation, but Chrysalis has approached her with an offer she can't refuse: Become her lover.

Luna accepts.

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It's a bad idea to mess with Luna Equestris, the Princess of the Night.

6060793 Yup. Bad idea to kill a Princess, too.
Bad idea to even try.

Beautiful.......

Thank Celestia for Rated Pony Star

Very nice. Luna played the long game. A chess mistress indead.

Wow, didn't see that coming. How could I have doubted the Princess of the Night, shame on me.

Great story. I loved how Luna played her.

6365335 ' Luna tilted her head, blinking. "Long?" '

6367051 ... um... I... THINK that's a good thing?

6367665 well yes, the long game. No immediate revenge but revenge down the road. Course when your as old as Luna is...10 years is a eyeblink.

6367665 YES. YES IT IS. D: Love this freakin' story!

Revenge is best served cold etc. ;)

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Typo

Where was she when her sister was dieing?

dying

The changelings’ hive mind with you will be broken, and you will be unable to change.

Maybe add something like "...connection with you..."

Is the killing joke a reference to Fallout: Equestria?

6653675 I never really go into FO:E, so no.

So was Luna planning to Chrysalis all along to get ponies to appreciate her ?

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She planned to murder Chrysalis in a brutal and painful fashion, while simultaneously removing any potential fallout from the Changeling spies. She also wanted to keep Equestria stable, which meant preventing the nobility or the commoners from rising against her in a civil war.

If she could find a way to do it while making the ponies of Equestria love her, hey, bonus.

Cadence, the Princess of Love. A pony who had given her love to all, and spread it wherever she went. She had not even come into her own as a ruler, for the Crystal Empire remained sealed away. The coroner had done an admirable job of hiding the rot, Luna thought, but over a month alone in a cave would do horrible things to a corpse, even if the pony hadn’t died by starvation beforehoof. Luna’s keen eyes picked out the missing feathers, the holes the coroner had missed or been unable to entirely conceal. She tried not to eye the poor young alicorn’s lips - those had been rotten away entirely, and the false cover for them was almost horrifyingly obvious to her immortal eye. There was only so much they could do...

cadance is immortal though 💀 she cant die

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