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Mystical Rainboom


You may know of my power, but you may never know my limits- ?????

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Derpy came to return the jar for the fireworks to Doctor Hooves. Unfortunately, her clock caught on to Doc's secret breakthrough and she travels to the past with the background six.

The butterfly effect kicks in and leads to enough loops to get a time traveler's mind throbbing in pain.

(There's just a hint of Derpy x Whooves. Hence the tag.)
(In the future, bonus chapters through all episodes may be attempted)

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Comments ( 10 )

Not bad. I like the idea of them having to undo a cascade of failures across time.

The story could do with a bit of editing, though. And possibly change the pacing a bit. As is, it's very rushed.

Still, I liked it.

6182813 Do you think anyone would say anything if I someday came back and added a few more episodes on it.

(Either that or I'll make a bonus chapter for more.)

6182825 They might say "More chapters? What a pleasant surprise! We approve of this!" (British accent may or may not be included.)

So yeah, go for it.

No offense...but how exactly is this a Lunaverse story?

6183348 I couldn't find the requirements for it to be included, but I put it in the "to be sordid" folder just incase it wasn't.:scootangel:
If it's not I'll gladly take it back.

6183387
Well, the Lunaverse is a specific AU centered on the idea that Luna instead of Celestia remained Princess, and Trixie instead of Twilight became the Element of Magic. It's all one cohesive universe, though, not just a collection of any stories with that premise. The New Readers page has the basic details.

This story doesn't seem to be Lunaverse-related, even tangentially. Sorry...

6183496 Thnx. Now I'm sure. If your a mod could you fix that?

This is crazy. ¡I love it!

"No way. We'd meet our pastselves and vanish or something. It always happens in movies." Lyra said.

I don't think that's how it works it just changed the course of the timeline that's all it is

Man that was some crazy scenario how the doctor and the other background characters had to deal with this especially helping the main six not knowing they got help and almost causing a massive Havoc and messing with the timeline but at least they fixed it even though there are still some minor setbacks but at least it worked out I guess this was a pretty interesting one keep up the good work

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