Rarity was a little filly when she was inspired by a lone designer to become who we know her as today, but after years of admiring him, she is pained greatly by his judgement.
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The Derpy Doctor
"There has to be evil so that good can prove its purity above it." — Gautama Buddha
The Derpy Doctor
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Didn' really understand what was going on, and there were a few things here and there. But overall, it was ok.
Too rushed, not a lot of heart. I give it a 4/10
colt & filly
Yeah, I just had the idea of this story while I was at my reunion and decided "why not," It could have a rating of 0 likes, 9 dislikes, I wouldn't care. I know this is and never will be a really good work anyway, why spend more than an hour typing it?
>.< Oh no you just didn't do the ... >.> Wow ummm hmmmm >.> To much of the ... >.> some of the description were off by using the ... + it's just to short for something like that. I just read another book that is has a few chapters like this. >.> Although life is complected with short cuts of this ... Things.
After I return to FIM Fiction all I been reading 2 books so far. With ... >.> and the other 1 did 2 short chapters and the other 1 was long chapter. >.>
Pretty decent. Not quite the groundbreaking work I've seen from you in the past Doc, but I understand you were rushed and didn't really want to waste a whole lot of effort doing it. T I can forgive. Pretty decent, I'd maybe give it a 5-6/10
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