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Fluttershy hears something crunching for help in the Everfree Forest and calls the Mane 6 over to find the creature. The creature turns out to be a brown and orange spots plant? Fluttershy takes the creature back and takes care of it but can she handle the creature on her own?
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>>Tri-Fighter
Great story!
Has a few grammar issues. But I have same problem.
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"Why?"
You may ask. 
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>>Tri-Fighter
One more thing!
If you want me to point out the grammar issues, I will gladly do that.
6519912 YES! Can you do that for this story and It was right over THERE!?
6520169
Okay!
Give me a hour or so to look at it over, and I will tell you.
6520169
"What could that be?" she thought. The "she" is suppose be capitalized. It's in the second paragraph.
angel Angel needs to be capitalized.
(since it's a name. 
) 
It's at this part.
"Where Fluttershy and Rainbow got back to the cottage."
"Umm...hello ,Fire Piranha Plant. I'm Fluttershy and these are my friends!" The "o" in "hello" has to be next to the comma. And capitalized the "H" in Hello.
(Suppose to look like this.
)
"Umm...Hello, Fire Piranha Plant. I'm Fluttershy and these are my friends!"
[b"Umm...Rarity, why are you here?"
(Suppose to look like this.
)
"Umm... Rarity, why are you here?"
I think their is some more, but it's night time over here.
And I'm going to go to bed. 
(Sorry, long day.
)
I'll be back!
If their are more mistakes, i'll tell you tomorrow!
Yes, Fluttershy Rainbow deserve to get burned for insulting Fire Piranha. Seriously though not one ounce of concern for her. What a bitch and no one calls her out on it.