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6214493 New chapter is up!
Getting interesting. Great job bro.
6242964 Thanks, just hope people don't start disliking it!
6243036 One thing to be wary is what group your story is in.
6243868 Agreed
6260745 Zu'u dreh ni mindoraan.
6264301 yeah but nocturnal is still a daedric prince nocturnal may be praised as a god but she isnt a god
its like if someone could go back in time to when humans were savages and havent even made fire yet if the time traveler made fire they would most likely be praised as a fire god even though that sort of thing is common knowledge these days
I need moar! XD
I think I'm in love with this story now!!! Iz sooooooo good! :D
But in all seriousness I have a question.
Do you actually know the Dovah language? And if so where did you learn it?
It just kinda dawned on me that the Dovah conversations are really specific lol
Also I just noticed that you have two chapter 10's. Hellequin and tick of my heart. JST thought I'd say :P
6264700 touché good sir. I haven't played skyrim or did any research for quite a while (but I'm gonna replay the game soon and reread the lore) so I may be a bit rusty, but if you think about it in technicality, nocturnal is known by the guild to be "an almighty being with control over luck and night. I don't know about you but that's gonna take some serious power. If being able to control odds and an entire part of the day/night cycle isn't enough to earn god status, I'm not sure what is!
But you do however have a point.
She is technically just a deadric prince, even though people worship her...
Wait a second....
That makes those people cultists! I just noticed that! XD
6265875 To answer all your questions in one comment. Yes I know my are and our is messed up, it is something I have always had trouble with, especially trying to remember what each is. Second I do know some Dovahzul but I am a bit rusty. Third I am glad you appreciate my story! It has been awhile trying to write this most recent chapter because I am also working on another piece. So please give me some time and I promise I will fix it...unless you may be willing to help me edit which if you are I will be happy to let you do some grammatical proofing and if you are open to some ideas about how I can improve the story flow I will also listen. Than you for your review and I appreciate it!
6265893 I'd be glad to go ever the story after you've written it and check for grammatical errors if you ever feel you need that type of help from an editor, but I don't want any spoilers before the chapter is finished COMPLETLY. I still like to be suprised, even if I'm helping a writer edit their story! ^_^
In short,
I'll help edit your story,but only if you really want me to and only AFTER you are done writing the chapter!
Also I don't really like helping authors with ideas for their stories because in my opinion it ruins it.
An example of this is if you msg me one day and ask for an idea and I say to have pinkie get put into a coma or something, I wouldn't get that shock of the moment while reading it. I like feeling my heart rate go up while reading something intense!!! Dat feelins awsum! :D
6265923 Thank you and that is exactly what I want. All I need is if you can, go back through a chapter and point out grammatical mistakes and if you wish to read more of my stuff than please read Spirit of The Mountain. It only has two chapters right now but I think you will find it...most enjoyable.
6265923 By the way, you had some errors in your comment lol.
6265938 lol I was trying to type twice the sped of my normal rate so I guess I got a bit crude there, but I'll gladly check out the other story and I'll go through the chapters again to catch grammatical errors, but first I need to know wether you want the entire area with the error and the error pointed out or just like "hey this was spelled wrong and this contradicts this."
6265947 By all means, the more specific the better!
6265960 I'll start tomorrow morning because it's 1 am at the moment. XD
Roger that Waco 2-4.
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https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=jmI0hqriD8g
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