The Scraping

What are those ill feelings you have? Directed towards the one you love most in the world. It's wrong isn't it? To feel that way?

Isn't it?

Princess Luna doesn't know anymore.

Set 1000 years ago.
Audio reading by TheDizzyDan.
Audio reading by Plagen Shiki.

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re- Yamsmos

re- Yamsmos #1 · Jul 16th, 2015 · 2 · ·

Oh my God. This was amazing. I really can't say much.

I love this.

NorrisThePony

NorrisThePony #2 · Jul 16th, 2015 · 3 · ·

This was pretty damn good. I like how you wrote Luna here, and how she is clearly and realistically struggling with her feelings and trying to stop her love towards Celestia from wavering.

Typically Luna is written as almost completely blameless, but you've created a good balance by simply writing her feelings instead of trying to appease some melodramatic, symbolic ulterior motif.

the dobermans

the dobermans #3 · Jul 17th, 2015 · · ·

Added to Sad Luna.

ultra1437

ultra1437 #4 · Jul 17th, 2015 · · ·

Very well done.

sugartrot

sugartrot #5 · Aug 15th, 2015 · 6 · ·

This is very nice. I like how she isn't written as the perfect pony ever the shining beacon of the fandom. It's a good balance and doesn't write Celestia as an evil bitch as other fics do.

NorrisThePony