• Member Since 17th May, 2015
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Burning Sunset


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Sunset Shimmer was once the most feared girl at school, but by some miracle she turned that around and became loved by most of the student body as well as gaining wonderful friends. One little incident changes all of that and Sunset finds herself going back to old habits in order to protect herself as she learns that the most important lesson is that friendship is bull. Can the love of someone who has wronged her help change all of that and make Sunset realize that she did no wrong and that the ones who needed to learn a lesson was everyone else? Can there ever be forgiveness and a happy ever after?

This actually started out as a plot bunny but will be a full short story consisting of 2 to 4 chapters unless I decide to make it into an epic story! :pinkiehappy:

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Comments ( 26 )

This is VERY interesting! I'm curious to see where it goes!

I noticed Granny Smith is going t be in the story...I have a feeling The CMC are going to get a whipping soon.

6226844 Hopefully in a direction you enjoy! :raritywink: Thanks! :heart:

6227207 I'll do my best! :pinkiecrazy:

6227316 Granny will be playing an important role in the story so hope you enjoy! :scootangel:

6227680 Considering I like every one of these type's you've made I have no doubt it'll be good. :pinkiehappy:

6227316 Yes! I never considered that Sunset would relapse because of the incident, and this is the first story I've read that explores that possibility. So keep it up! I'll keep reading!

Lyra, Bon-Bon, you two better not be up to no good!

So I take it this is an AU where the CMC never confessed leaving Sunset very lonely during Christmas? Her relapsing back into her old ways is an interesting take. Other stories have taken the "return to Equestria" or "suicide attempt" route.

I hope the student body is called out on their behavior: Gladly backstabbing one another, sending secrets to Anon-A-Miss, and getting mad when the friends they betrayed do the same. "Friendship is bullshit" indeed. From what I could tell the only (named) student not being a tool was Vinyl Scratch (during the cafeteria scene she was the only background student not fighting). Maybe Sunset should start hanging out with her?

Anyways, looking forward to seeing where you'll go with this.

what happens next

You going to be updating this soon or what?

God damn it man update this shit. I WANT MOAR:flutterrage:

When will you post the next chapter of this really well written story?

The love of someone who has wronged her...I would assume this to either be a Parental-type love, from Luna's counterpart, due to her most likely thinking that she was Anon-A-Miss, or perhaps a student who wronged her with accusations...possibly Fluttershy, from the way your other stories are heading. But then, I just need to wait until you update, huh?

I'm not too surprised that Sunset relapsed, actually. She was only trying Friendship out because Twilight asked her to do so, and when they just threw it back in her face at the first sign of trouble...well, people have relapsed into bad habits for far less than that.

Hopefully, Luna will help Sunset deal with her emotions and get past this. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Please update as soon as you can

You want to get off of your ass and get back to this?

7479708 view the author's latest blog

Good start, i'm hooked.
Sunset being fed up with all that bullshit and going back to being Queen Bitch Extraordinaire is an interesting way to go and i certainly hope that this story will continue someday.

What ever you do don't cancel the story

Two years........ and haven't been on in a year

No matter what people can say, I will wait as long as it takes and as you need for any next chapter, because the first one is good enough for me to believe a great story can follow.

So keep going, unless it is cancelled. But hey, your story, your rules right?

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Umm, sorry to burst your bubble, man, but the author hasn't logged on in 3 years.

You won't get that next chapter...sorry buddy

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Replying to a 2018 comment in 2021.
I don't think I'm the one who needs to have his bubble bursted.

And like I said, I don't care if you all can't accept the fact that he does not owe anything to you, that the story will be updated or not no matter what you could say or think.

You are not important to the writer, even less with that toxic thinking of yours.

If the story won't be updated ever again then I will cherish what he gave us rather than focusing on what he couldn't do, or didn't give us like you.

Being entitled about it only makes it worse.
Grow up kid.

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Wait, when have I said that I cared more about the next chapter than what the writer gave us?

Buddy, I just came to say that he hasn't logged on in 3 years. I don't know how you managed to garner that I'm an entitled kid, but I just came to say he hasn't logged on, not...whatever you wrote about me being entitled

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