Introduction
Daring Do panted and panted, barely lifting her hooves as she walked down the path. But her legs were always ready for an adventure, and they should be, for what they're doing today.
Because Daring do was going on a quest that no one else has ever finished and returned.
Getting weaker ever step, she finally made it to her destination.
Good Job.
6233100 thanx
Can you elaborate a little more in your descriptions for your next piece? As a reader, it's nice to use imagination, of course, but it's also good to feel like we are really there. But I really liked your idea and hope to see more adventures!
6243632 yeah, but I'm kinda always in a hurry and I didn't have much time for that, it puts a lot of pressure on me to finish in one day, it's tough.
6243886 It makes a big difference if you've only got one day, that is hard. Just do what you can do. I don't want you to feel pressured