The Sangheili are a saurian species of fierce, proud, strong, agile, intelligent warriors and skilled combat tacticians. They are named after their home planet, Sanghelios, and are known to Humans as Elites, due to their adeptness and skill in combat. The Sangheili formed the military backbone of the Covenant for almost the entirety of its existence, they fear very little, and take great pride in an ancient, honor-laden code.
However, this group of Spec Ops Elites, Grunt, and Kig-Yar have crashed landed in Equestria by way of a slipspace drive being detonated in the middle of the ship they were heading to, the 'Glory Upon Salvation'.
Now they have to find a way off the planet and back into space so they can continue their journey to the Blessed Path... by dropping hot plasma on human worlds.
But will they want to, when something they revere tells them otherwise?
Recently tagged as Teen for implied violence, and (maybe) minor gore in future chapters.
I want moooooooooooor
641285 added in some music
A Sangheili in Equestria? My interest is peaked, rarely do we see this in a halo crossover without at least a human being involved.
I'll keep a tab on you. I tried adding stories to read later but it doesn't work
Also...GEMME MORE!
*watching*
Hm...to short to say if it is good but story line for now is going to be good. I'm not familiar with Halo universe but i think i can deal with this story one way or another ;) This is almost like... putting Predator into MLP.
I'nul Alnah
Pronounced: Ih-nul Al-nah
How's that for a name?
MOAR
Oooh, I like it. Most Halo crossovers mostly involve a Spartan or a ODST being transported somewhere, but Elites are nearly never done.
Interesting take on an almost-cliché concept. Apart from a few grammatical hiccups, I like everything so far. You've earned yourself a fave.
644115 In the Sangheili culture names carry great importance if you will remember the Arbiter is always called the Arbiter and the Ship master is called the Ship master, they are refereed to by rank not name. Of all the humans the Spartans are the only ones who deserve a name Demon
nok'nethal
Hmm. I just started writing a fic with Elites heading to Equestria, but they were to be accompanied by Humans as I was setting it post-civil war. Interesting to see how the Covenant react as a whole. I hope you keep at least one Unggoy alive. Yayap was the best character in the first Halo book. A Kig-Yar would be cool too, to get the whole variety thing. Anyway, best of luck, favouriting and liking.
644719 I was planing on all but two elites dying, but I like your concept more. I'll definetly keep one of each alive!
644379 what kind of hiccups? I really want to improve but I just see myself stuc
644354 that's why I did it!
This is good! People are getting more creative with the creatures in Equestria. No longer will humans be the only sentient species in Ponyville! In fact, just yesterday I read a story where the U-3 from Resident Evil 4 was sent to Equestria. New doors are opening, and new adventures await!!!
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Well, here's a few:
* Generally, Special Operations are abbreviated to Spec Ops or SpecOps, never Spec OPs. Capitalizing two letters in the second word indicates it's a plural of an acronym, not an abbreviation.
* If you use an ellipsis, you don't need to capitalize the next line. example: "from two of the soldiers they killed... Then the humans in armor came" should be "from two of the soldiers they killed... and then the humans in armor came", or even ["i]from two of the soldiers they killed. Then the humans in armor came."
* Apostrophes aren't needed everywhere. example: " and two or three ODST’s" should be " and two or three ODSTs". Also, remember that "it's" is a contraction of "it is", not "the [x] belonging to it."
* Also, make sure to only capitalize after a new sentence. example: "Okay girls, Finally." should be "Okay girls, finally."
* About when saying someone starts saying something... well, that can vary. If the sentence is first, followed by the speaker, use comma to end the sentence, and don't capitalize the next word unless it's a name. If the speaker is first, and then the sentence, use an apostrophe to connect the two. example: "She usually has some big finale when it’s over.” The purple unicorn" should be "She usually has some big finale when it’s over,” the purple unicorn"
Anyway, that's just a few. If you need another pre-reader, I'll be happy to help. I'd be sad to see an otherwise-great story to be shamed by grammar nazis such as myself.
645455 I will fix those when I get home, and I would love if you were a prereader
Love it man. You don't usually see this kind of thing, most of the time there is at least 1 human but this will be interesting.
645273 mah boi, times are changing, for the better.
But I have only one question...
How many points do I recieve?
645979 haha thank you
I read so many halo fanfics, and it saddened me that only two or three have Elites in them, so I said no to humans :boulderconfictedemotions: and here is your Elte warrior in Equestrian Hahaa
645989 All the points, as well as a complementary pair of socks.
DO continue this story. I am quite interested in the next chapter.
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Sure...
i am intrigued. will like and fav.
I need so mutch more dude, this is freakin awsome
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OH! Thanks! I get it now!
As long as this doesn't turn into a battlefield expanding the war (which from a purely cannon standpoint would make no sense, which most crossovers ignore) I will stick around. This shows promise with good text and standing out from the masses with something other than a human making first contact.
651273 There won'y be any wars hitting Equestria any time soon, I guarantee it
I shall try my hardest to make this an awesome fanfic :D
Heya reader! just wanted to say THANK YOU!! in two days this is my most faved and best rated fanfic. Thank you all so much! I hope you enjoyed this chapter as you did the first. If not, please tell me why and I will try my best to make any future chapters better, or change this chapter so it fits right!
I'm hoping jorge survived?
652114well we normal get human/spartan to equestria and this is the first elite to equestria story i have found. Can't wait for next update
Love it! Although it was a little confusing differentiating some of the characters views. Now make more!
I will speak diplomatically for what I believe that everyone who has read this thinks: MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR
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I FRIGIN LOVE IT...
I WANY MORE
I have seen this before but i cant tell where?
This is becoming a interesting part.
Keep some nice work up.
Edit: for got random quote
Random quote of the comment (not written by me)
"I snapped my hooves. [Screw physics! I have hooves!]"
Shoulda killed em (I just aorta Hate ab)
Hmmm... intriguing.
Definitely a different take on a Halo crossover. You have got my attention.
Also, I would assume that you have read the Halo novels? The more recent ones are a gold mine of information about the Sangheili.
Mooaaarrrr “so awesome“
Moar please... Also as Party Brigade said, people normally just post spartan, odst, or marines being sent to Equestria. But you took the leap and went for some covenant, and I have to say that this is amazing. Keep up the good work!
653998 I have read them, but not the most recent, I'll be sure to take a look see later
654520 thank you!
As for all who read this comment I mine,
Once again thank you all for giving me the positive feedback, it means a lot!!
The latest chapter(2) will be edited later in the day to make sure it's easier to read!
I'll give the editor credit when I save it
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Chapter two has been revised, go check it out!
Same concept, but more clarity on who is talking and what not!
655412 Thank you my good man!
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655412
You're welcome. And if you want me to preread, remember my bedtime!
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I shall!!!
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It is definitly something to keep on watch for.
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will you be using events in halo's main story in this one like when the elites leave the covanent?
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unknown. I may or may not, most likely not... With them being God-knows how far away from the battle they are
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ok thank you for letting me know