This is a backstory to a deviantART friend's OC Princess Diamond Jewel and how she was born and her life along side her mother Luna in the days following Luna's redemption from Nightmare Moon.
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic and it's characters belongs to Hasbro and Lauren Faust, Princess Diamond Jewel belongs to Lexi Dotter aka: princessdiamondjewel
The story of Princess Diamond Jewel, by princessdiamondjewel, written by BlackHat6
New Readers: If critiquing, leave a constructive and advise giving comment, if you have none do not leave one...other than that Like and Fave if you choose.
i like it and BlackHat6 please make more chapters for this story
6290045 There are 3 more Chapters, I hope they are good, and also the owner (who loved all 4 chapters) of the story she assigned me to write this because of my own OC story on here too, even though it is struggling at 6 Like, 10 Dislikes, 4 Favored.
6290107 ok
i like it and BlackHat6 please don't have the foal while she is grows up think that princess Celestia is her mother when princess luna is her real birth mother in this story
6290473 She will not, she knows Luna is her mother.
6290492 okay
okay i will wait for it to be posted
I really have problems understanding why ten readers would dislike this without one of them saying why. Perhaps it is the fact that there in no slash and spatter, no pony is attacked with a weedwacker or sliced and diced.
Now don't get me wrong, I love “ the Chase” and there is no shortage of the aforementioned in that. Maybe it's that this is about love, forgiveness and family. Oh well differences of opinion are what makes a horse race. Will put soap box away now. Up vote and save. Keep up the good work.
B.D.
6291647 THANK you, that was one of the most special comments I have received on here since I started and I posted my 2 stories.
Good
6374312 Thank you....I hoped it was.
6376016 well i at least tryed to
6376559 You did, and I thank you nonetheless.
6376607 ok well i wasnt telling the full truth the story needs a little sqeual to tell about life growing out of baby hood and into kid,teen,and adult hood you left me wondiring and no reader likes that
6376631 I guess I could write a sequel to it.
6376636 ok yay
Cute very cute.
6550503 Thank you and thank you for the favoriting.
6550919 no problem
6551005 What did you like about the story?
6551274 The love how you handled the idea plus I only favorite stories I've finished reading and might want to read another day.
6551333 Oh okay, thank you.
D'awwwww! Nobody saw this!
6829436 Hope you like this one; this is a slice of life and cutesy story.
i have the most stupidest grin on my face right now, this much cuteness should be weaponized!
6829476 That was the goal with this besides a back story for this friend.
Too much cuteness! Must...stay...strong....
Someone put up shields!
Sir, the cuteness levels are still rising!
Those shields will hold! I hope....
Oh boy, It's the Canterlot version of the CMC!
woah interesting chapter! AND my first comment
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Thank you so much for this comment.
Awwww I wish it wasn't over
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Sorry about that, this was an origin story.
I am pleased you liked it though.
Liked it? no.
ILOVED IT!!!!!!!!!
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