No! I wont let this happen again. I wont let them feed another world to that demon. I thought we were trying to stop this from happening, and now they're running head long into the apocalypse! I made a vow to protect them and this world... well not this one exactly. I just don't know if I can save both now. We may not be who we were anymore, but I'll fight to make sure we don't loose ourselves while stuck in this world of colorful pony people. I'll use everything I have to keep them safe, or I'm not the Dark Night Alternis Dim... But most know me as Ringabel.
I don't own either MLP:FiM or Bravely Default, those are owned by Hazbro and Square Enix Respectively.
Another Displaced fic.
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I'm interested but I hope more info will be filled in later. Also, there seemed to be a point where you forgot to fix the Italic. It's at the point where Ringabel finds out who he used the Sleep sword spell on.
6306019 Thanks, it will, and I fixed it.
Miiiight want to fix the title, since it's misspelled and all.
It's not a good sign for the quality of a work when the title is wrong.
Interesting sounding fic, I love the game and I really want to see what you can do with it, definitely added to read later.
6306021 Oh, another question. Will there be crossovers with other Displaced stories?
6306195 I'm considering it, but this is a side project with slightly lower priority so I don't know how many I could do.
6306065 You do realize how common transposition of letters is, in fact it is one of easiest type-o's to miss.
6306278 Yes, but it's the very first thing any prospective reader sees, followed by the synopsis. Glaring errors in either one are likely to turn away any number of readers, which is a shame, considering how much effort it takes to craft a story. All that effort, wasted before it's even sampled.
(Also, "typo," unless you really like Order of the Stick and "treasure type O.")
Its nice you didnt give him dark knight right off the bat and in sted chose another swordman type not what i plan to do but nice all the same