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Dudeler


Just a guy that does whatever comes to mind. Giving the D, trolling, cockblocking, and laughing maniacally may apply.

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So this is the reboot, I assume? Can't wait to give it a read and see how it's improved.
~TOOWC

This story seems interesting. Starry is a likable colt and his crush on Granite and Misty is adorable, particularly when he talks with his teddy bear. Likewise, Lumina's crush on Shining and her comedic friendship with Nil made me smile. You're going to get a fav and a like. Hope to see more of this story.

6330724 Thank you! I will certainly try to do my best. :twilightsmile:

This is a vary interesting story and it defiantly looks to be going places.
I feel this story is worthy of too thumbs up and much more.
you are doing a exultant job Dudeler.
Harts Fire

Ah I've been waiting for this to come back for so long, this makes m so happy man, loving the reworks so far :)

Wow, watching Granite and Misty be flustered and worried about how to dress around Starry is adorable, especially when Starry himself finds them attractive. Great job on the chapter.

Quick question: Is polygamy a thing in this society?

this is turning in to a interesting story.
but question are you going to be doing herding?
Harts Fire

6364530 6364925 You'll have to find that out later. :trollestia:

Of course she's a photomancer. *frustrated horse noises*

a interesting chapter. things are starting to form up.

Man, Lumina has quite the interesting background story. I really laughed when she sniffed Shining's pillow. Still, I do feel curiosity about Lumina and Nil's magic and wonder why Bright wanted her to join the Guards. Awesome job on the chapter, man.

So Granite and Misty are an earth bender and a water bender respectively. Cool.

Got to say that I feel bad for Starry and I'm surprised that Granite and Misty had control over Earth and Water elements. Still, I'm surprised that Granite is badass enough to beat upperclassmen in anime style (breaking jaws and embedding people in ceilings) or that Misty practices fencing. It was a nice chapter.

ok this is just to good I will be grinning for a week.
:pinkiehappy:
Harts Fire

Wow, I feel really bad for Lumina. I knew that Shining was with Cadence and that he had reasons to keep it a secret, but for Lumina to find out by catching them together was heartbreaking. Great chapter.

I would offer more incentive for you to write more of this but I can't. So have a like and favorite instead! :pinkiehappy:

Nice chapter, especially Starry learning magic from the mystery mare, but man can the guy be overdramatic/impulsive by running away without talking with his loved ones about why they wanted to send him away. I'm not saying it out of criticism, I'm saying it because when Misty and Granite find him again in the future, they'll probably going to punch/slap/yell at the poor grown up guy and he's probably not realize why they're so pissed. Anyway, the chapter was awesome. Thanks, hope to see what happens with Lumina soon.

That fucking cliffhanger... Nice fic, caught up now, maybe I'll try your other fics too.
Heh, that's how I got here actually, I was re-reading some chapters from "The Model's Secretary" and saw this on the author's tab.

Nice to see another chapter of the story and that Lumina and Starry have become friends. I got to say that I found it hilarious that Starry developed a crush on Lumina and how his mind side-tracked by reading the tag of her bra. Anyway, thanks for the chapter. Hope the next one comes soon.
P.S: Who is Sultry? I don't remember her in the previous chapters.

7082142 Sultry is Granite's mom who runs her own tailoring business.

Well obviously the girls are wielders as well but how will they find Starry and get in on this journey?

YES! Man, you don't know how happy I am right now, the idea you had for this fic is perfect, the characters are cool, man this is one of my favorite ongoing stories. Keep it up!

7582678 Was there something in that chapter that you didn't understand?

7583145 Okay. The use of that meme seemed like you were confused about something, though I guess it could also be shock.

Will the Equestria Girls universe be mentioned in this story?

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Is the entire chapter meant to be in bold text?

7851874 Crap. No, something messed up once I uploaded the gdoc on here. Fixed.

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