I am a beginning writer, who is only 10 years old, so please be nice to me in your comments. I am here because I love to write and I love to watch MLP! Negative comments will be deleted and ignored!
The mane six have finally grown apart and had kids of their own.Twilight still lives in her castle with Discord and her two daughters.Rarity lives with Double Diamond and her two daughters and is trying to move to Canterlot.Pinkie, AJ, Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash have theirs too.
(sorry for the picture that has nothing to do with the story, there will not be the colt versions in this story.)
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DA few notes one spaces between charaters dialouge two a little more detai. Who are all of these charatcer annd why is Shinning Armor married to Rainbow besides Candace? What do they look like are they pegsi, unicorn, earth. Four longer chapters may help get your pint across five this has nothing to do with your story but every time SweetHeart pops up in a story I think about my oc charater Sweet Heart I hope this helps and sorry for my bad spelling I'm typing this on my cellphone
I will tell you why Rainbow is married to Shining it's because Candace is now married to Prince Blueblood now I don't know why I put them together I just did for some unknown reason.Space Spark is a purple alicorn with a pink and black mane, Gem Blossom is a white unicorn with a blue, white and purple mane and loves gems, Cookie Dough Madness is pink earth pony with a sugarcoated hoof and pink and aqua mane like Party Favor's, Dapper Delight's father is Soarin she is a orange earth pony with a red and white mane and her cutie mark is a zap apple,Sweetheart is a yellow pegasus with a brown and pink mane and her cutie mark is pink and brown hearts with wings and her father is Braeburn,Shock Wave is a white pegasus with a rainbow mane and rainbow hooves and her cutie mark is a shock wave explosion and finally Sound Wave is a cyan pegasus with a dark purple mane and cutie mark is a purple sound wave and there you have the ponies in this story.
Um... in this first chapter I have some important notes.
1) what does everypony look like?
(a) are these all pegasi, unicorns, or earth ponies?
2) what are the mannerisms?
3) what does the environment look like (Everfree High doesn't exist as cannon, anywhere)?
4) What in the world are Rainbow Dash and Shinning Armor doing?
Shinning lives with Cadence in a Princess-dom far far away. Rainbow Dash lives in ponyville.
Sorry for no chapters in a long time I was trying to think of some good ideas for the story maybe you guys can give me some of your own ideas for the story.That could really help me out and help chapters come out faster let me see what you got in the comments.Hope you like the chapter, let me know if you do and see you in the next one~Twiliy T.