The Princess held the small, charred device. “This little thing allowed you to absorb magic?”
Twilight blushed. “Yeah... I wasn’t very careful with it. But I’m pretty sure I can work a better off switch on the next model.”
“Uh, Twi? You sure that's a good idea?” Applejack asked. “That thing caused a lot of trouble...”
“We’re going to need one in order to get some samples,” Sunset said. “But I’ve been looking over Twilight’s blueprints. The design is sound.”
The Princess beamed. “Nice to know I’m a prodigy in every dimension.”
Twilight blushed. “It’s not that big of a deal...”
“Will you just learn to take a compliment?” Rainbow Dash asked, causing Twilight to blush more.
The Princess put a hand on her shoulder. “That was one of the first lessons I learned. You shouldn’t be ashamed of your talents. Being proud isn’t the same as being arrogant.”
“Yeah, well, when you’re hated by everyone for being smarter than them, it tends to sour your mood,” Twilight said, looking down. Dog Spike shot her a sympathetic look, but was too distracted by Fluttershy scratching his belly to come to her.
“Actually, that sounds a lot like when I went to the School for Gifted Unicorns.”
“What? But didn’t you say you were the student of a princess? Wouldn’t that have made you super-popular and got you invited to a whole lot of parties and...” Pinkie went on until Rainbow Dash clapped a hand around her mouth.
“Yeah, like that’s how it works,” Twilight mumbled over Rainbow Dash’s disgusted cry after Pinkie licked the hand covering her mouth.
“Let me guess: being Celestia’s favorite just put a target on your back?” Sunset asked, experience clear in her voice.
“Happened to you, too?” the Princess asked.
“Well, yeah. Of course, after I tossed the first one that tried to get physical halfway across the room, nopony was brave enough to get near me again,” Sunset said, a smirk clearly visible.
“Wish I’d have had that kind of aggressiveness,” the Princess admitted. “I just tried ignoring it until Princess Celestia stepped in.” She then turned back to her alternate. “My point is, I was a lot like you back then. I thought friendship was a waste of time. It wasn’t until Celestia made me go into Ponyville that I realized what I had been missing.”
Twilight looked at the Princess for a moment. “...I just can’t see it.”
“What do you mean?”
“I can’t picture you acting like me. I can’t picture Sunset acting like a bully. It’s just... so surreal.”
To Twilight’s surprise, her royal counterpart just chuckled. “Friendship does weird things to ponies... er, people. Believe me, soon you’ll be wondering how you lived without them.”
Twilight gave a weak smile and nodded. “I already can’t. They chased off this girl named Fleur that was always bullying me. Now every time she sees me, she just scowls and walks off.”
At that, the Princess blinked. “Fleur De Lis? White with a dull pink ma- er, hair?”
“Yes. Do you know the other her?”
“I’ve met her once or twice, she’s one of... my Rarity’s best clients. She seems really nice, hardly anypony I’d call a bully.” The princess rubbed her chin. “I think I should ask her sometime about her past... if she’s willing to talk.”
“Ooh! Ooh! Flash alert!” Pinkie said, poking her head out the door frame. She shot a sly smile to the Princess. “And he’s alone! He’s getting something out of his locker!”
The Princess grinned, but quickly subdued herself. “Well, I suppose it would be rude not to say ‘hi’ to him... real quick...”
She made a move to the door, but stopped as Captain Flash followed. “Um... Captain... I would like to see your alternate... alone...”
“Princess, I’m not to leave your side!”
“Captain, I order you to wait!”
“...I cannot follow that order. We are out and about in foreign territory. Your safety is paramount.”
Sunset placed a hand on the Captain’s shoulder. “You know, you’re a real credit to your rank!”
The Captain was a bit surprised, but beamed at the compliment. “Thank you.”
“But we can’t have you getting in the way of romance, so...”
In a flash Sunset, Applejack, and Rainbow Dash tackled him to the ground and Rarity yelled “Go, Darling!” Princess Twilight was out the door with her bag while the Captain started yelling threats at the girls pinning him to the ground.
“Wow, I thought a guy would be happy to get to roll on the ground with three girls,” Pinkie said. Despite themselves, Fluttershy, Rarity, and Twilight laughed.
The Captain managed to push the girls off of her and was beginning to rise. “Let me go! I’m required to be at Twilight Sparkle’s side at all times!”
Twilight smiled until Pinkie pushed her forward. “Fine, here you go!”
Before Twilight could protest, Pinkie shoved her forward, causing her to trip and hit Captain Flash. The two fell right on top of each other, their faces inches apart.
It was the first time since being tackled that made the Captain silent.
Captain Flash’s brief pause was enough for Applejack and Rainbow Dash to get the duct tape and begin wrapping it around him.
As Twilight scrambled to her feet, her face red, the two athletic girls wrapped the shouting Captain up.
“I don’t blame you, Darling,” Rarity said. “He is quite a hunk.”
Twilight looked at her feet. “I... I guess.”
“And it would all work out since the Princess likes our Flash but not this one, so you can do the switcheroo and everything falls into place! It’s really convenient!”
Twilight was too embarrassed to reply.
Fluttershy looked at her. “Um... do you like Flash?”
Twilight recovered. “Huh? Which one?”
The yellow girl shrugged. “Either.”
Twilight shook her head. “I... I don’t know. The Flash here seems nice, but he’s already spoken for, and I didn’t have time to get to know him while studying magic. And I just met this new one. He’s...”
“Handsome?”
“Yeah... wait, I mean...” Twilight blushed again. “Uh... I don’t know. I’m a little surprised if any guys are ready to line up and date me after what happened at the Games.”
“Now, Twilight, we talked about this...” Rarity said.
“Not beating myself up about something isn’t the same as acknowledging the consequences,” Twilight snapped. “After turning into that thing, I’m not holding out hope of getting a date here.”
Pinkie blinked. “Really? But you were wearing...”
“Don’t remind me,” Twilight said, burying her face in her hands.
There was an awkward silence, only interrupted by Captain Flash’s muffled cries of outrage.
“Twilight, I think you’re selling yourself short. You’ve a very beautiful woman, and no one seems to hold that night against you. I dare say a few guys are looking at you.”
Now Twilight’s face was really burning. “W-what?”
“Yeah. You didn’t notice Micro Chips and Sandalwood giving you those lovesick looks?”
“N-no...” she blushed.
Sunset put a hand on her shoulder. “I told you, no one blames you. And you do look pretty good. It wouldn’t be surprising if guys started talking to you.”
Twilight was quiet for a moment. “I...”
“Heck, I bet Princess Twilight gets plenty of admirers,” Rainbow said.
“Too many,” Dragon Spike muttered. When that got him looks, he went on. “Don’t get me wrong, she had admirers before she became a princess, but afterward, she gets marriage proposals daily. And most of them are from nobles that have never met her. And the ones she has met... well, I’d beat them up for coming near Twilight that way, if Shining Armor didn’t beat me to it.”
Dog Spike could only chuckle. “Yeah, I believe that. Our Shining Armor tried to train me to attack any guy that put moves on her.”
Applejack rolled her eyes. “Men...”
“Who you calling a man?” Dog Spike asked.
“Believe me, we’re being merciful. Twilight’s hard to get angry, but when she does...” Dragon Spike shivered. “Better to deal with her family than her.”
At that point, Princess Twilight came back in the room, a content smile on her face.
“Ooh!” Rarity squealed, getting close to her. “How was it? What’d he say?”
The Princess never wavered in her happiness. “I’ll never tell... well, okay, I will, but later. We have work to do.”
“Oh, no, no!” Rarity said, “you can’t just meet up with Flash and leave it at that! You need to tell us!”
“Now, now, Rare, she’ll tell us when she’s ready,” Applejack said. “You want us to untie your Captain?”
The Princess looked down at the still struggling Captain.
“...Eh, he’ll be fine for a little while longer. Now tell me, what have you figured out?”
Sunset slipped into lecture mode, ignoring Dragon Spike’s sigh that putting up with three Twilights’ lecturing was too much. “Well, I haven’t found a way to accurately measure power levels like we can in Equestria, but with Twilight’s device I think I can engineer something. Either way, it’s clear that magic is becoming more and more prominent. Like I said, it’s no longer just coming out when we play music.”
The Princess nodded. “Makes sense that it would come out in music first. Magic does that all the time in Equestria. Ponies can break out in choreographed song and dance numbers...”
“I knew it,” Twilight said. “I knew there had to be a reason I was singing in the hallway...”
“Ah, so it’s started here too,” the Princess said. “According to what you told me, you all pony up when you represent the Element of Harmony the other version of you has. Rarity’s generosity, Fluttershy’s kindness, Pinkie’s laughter, Applejack’s honesty, and Rainbow Dash’s loyalty.”
“Ooh! What’s your Element, Princess?” Pinkie asked.
The Princess gave a neutral look to Twilight. “We’ll discuss that in a minute,” she promised. “But my theory is that the Elements of Harmony must be forming themselves in this world in some way. The reason you all pony up is because you’re the rightful Bearers.”
“So... what? Does Sunset have yours?” Rainbow Dash asks.
“I don’t think so. Remember, Sunset ponied up with us when we defeated the Dazzlings. Even though there’s only supposed to be six... something doesn’t add up, but my Element had been lost to history... maybe...” The Princess took a deep breath. “Sunset, Twilight, can one of you write down a reminder to me to look all this stuff up? I still haven’t gotten used to using...” she glanced at her hands, “these...”
In a flash Sunset had a notebook out and was writing down things.
Nodding, the Princess reached into her bag and pulled out a thick book. She handed it to Twilight. “I had this commissioned after I got back from defeating the Dazzlings. When I heard magic was now in the human world, I had a feeling Sunset would try and study it. I made a book that will act like Sunset’s journal. Just write in it and the same text will appear in my copy in Equestria.”
Twilight took the book. “Thank you, but... what is it for?”
“I want to keep an eye on your progress. I wouldn’t be much of a princess if I didn’t keep an eye out for a potential threat to my kingdom, and a whole world getting magic thanks to us might lead to that.”
“What happened to the other set?”
The Princess tensed at Dragon Spike’s question. “What other set?”
“Didn’t you ask Celestia for two sets of journals?”
“...Why would I do that?” she asked.
Rarity suddenly got a grin across her face. The Princess, seeing this, quickly changed the subject. “Look, the point is it’s important that we stay in touch, especially if there needs to be cross-world research.”
Sunset smiled. “Yeah... especially since I can’t go back.”
The Princess looked at her. “Why would you think that?”
Sunset looked at the Princess like she had grown an extra head. “Twilight, didn’t you yourself tell me I was banished here for treason?”
“Yes... and the exact sentence said, ‘Until you learned the Magic of Friendship’. If the Dazzlings didn’t prove you’ve done that, what happened after the Games sure did. As far as I’m concerned, your sentence is over.”
“But... stealing the crown, and breaking into the Crystal Palace...”
“The first falls under the treason charge, and the second... well, as Celestia’s student, you’re allowed access to every piece of royal property. You can’t really break into anywhere you had permission to be anyway.”
Sunset looked ready to cry. “But... I’m not her student anymore...”
“You never turned in an official resignation. As far as Celestia’s concerned, you’re just twelve years late for class. As soon as you come back, she’s ready to pick up your lessons right where you left off.”
Sunset stood rigid. Now she was crying.
Twilight looked at the girl who had saved her and had a feeling like she was looking in a mirror. The same look she had at having so many people forgive her. It was so jarring. Sunset had been like an angel... no, she had been an angel, one who had offered her salvation in the darkness. Seeing her act so... flawed, was amazing.
Sunset wiped her eyes. “I... I really want to, but I can’t. Not yet. I’m responsible for all this magic, I can’t just leave it to run wild.”
The Princess nodded, as if this was the answer she wanted to hear. “I’m happen to agree... but promise me you’ll visit soon. Princess Celestia does miss you.”
Sunset smiled. “I will.”
“Good. Now then, there’s a final matter.” The Princess turned to Twilight. She shrank back from her her alternate, but the warm look she got soothed her. “Listen, I need you to tell me, honestly, how you felt over the last few days.”
Twilight blinked. “Why?”
“Trust me, it’ll all make sense soon.”
Twilight rubbed the back of her head. “Well... it’s been strange. I used to think I was better off without anyone but Shiny, Cadance, and Spike. But when I got to Canterlot High, everyone was so nice to me, even after they found out I wasn’t you, and even after they found out I went to Crystal Prep. And then when Sunset brought me down from being a monster, I... I knew I didn’t want to live any longer without them.”
The Princess nodded. “Come on, keep going.”
Twilight kept going. “I found myself enjoying things I never thought I’d enjoy. I like my morning runs with Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy, or my spa trips with Rarity, or working on homework with Sunset, or even all the silly little things Pinkie does. A few nights ago I had my first slumber party and played Truth or Dare, and I ended up downing a whole bottle of hot sauce after Rainbow dared me to. I used to think anyone who did something like that was an idiot, but even with how unpleasant it was, I just laugh at it.
“Now I’m actually wanting to go outside, and have fun, and do all these things I never even considered doing before just to be able to hang out with them and I don’t even mind if I’m not learning as much as I did before because I...”
And then there was the light.
Twilight felt a strange and pleasurable sensation run through her body as her world was engulfed in a bright, purple light. She felt herself levitate off the ground. She felt a strange feeling on the top of her head as if something was growing. She just felt... good.
When the light faded, everyone was staring at her with joyus expressions. Before she could react, everyone surrounded her in a group hug.
“You ponied up! You ponied up!” Pinkie said, hopping up and down as she said it.
“Wh-what?”
Rarity pulled out a compact mirror and handed it to her. Twilight looked at herself, and saw two pony ears on her head. She gave a small yelp and brought a hand up to feel it. Then she noticed that her hair had grown to an impossible long length, coming down to her ankles.
“I’m... like all of you. But how?”
The Princess smiled. “Twilight... my Element... your Element... is Magic. But I learned that Magic is just another word for Friendship. It only works correctly when you’re in harmony with others, when you learn to love and care for those around you. Five years ago I only loved my family. Now look: I embody Friendship, I can even love those that have hurt me like Sunset and Starlight.
“You think you’re unworthy because of what happened, that you’re a monster inside. You’re not. That creature was the result of a lot of bad feeling you were experiencing. Your fear at what Cinch was putting you through, your feelings that you weren’t good enough, and your anger.”
“I... I didn’t feel angry at anyone...”
“Maybe not consciously. But can you honestly tell me you weren’t angry at Cinch for blackmailing you? Or your classmates for bullying you? Or even Sunset for yelling at you?” When Twilight looked away, the Princess put a hand on her cheek and made her look back at her. “Those feelings are okay to have, but you were letting them consume you. Friends help that. That’s why there’s no point in getting mad at you. You’re already on the road to recovery, and I can’t leave you in better hands.”
Then the Princess hugged her. And she hugged back.
Wonder what the detention is there for being that tardy?
Amazing chapter, but I'm sorry to see this story end. It's an amazing tale.
Oh, and, before I forget, I ALSO like the one season = one year reasoning you seem to follow (which makes a heck of a lot more sense than trying to condense three seasons into one year). Makes me even more sure this would fit quite nicely as a near-future side story to your "Nuptialverse series". :-D
Another great job. I can't decide which part was my favorite! The interactions with Captain Flash and the girls while Twilight has an offscreen talk with her own crush, Sunset welcomed back to Equestria at anytime, and of course SciTwi ponying up were all nothing short of satisfying.
I actually have no trouble believing that.
That's not at all surprising And now I'm imagining Shining's pony self teaching Spike to breath fire on any stallions that got too close to Twilight
That's the most rational explanation for Shining's 'overprotective big brother' antics that I've seen to date. After all, an angry Twilight is far more destructive than anything they could do to the poor stallion.
My leg!!!!
It sort of makes sense that Twilight would be a few pages ahead of Sunset about understanding her human counterpart's powers. Indeed, to be closer to understanding what 'magic' is in the human world.
I also love the idea of a trained soldier being out-thought and outfought by the Humane Seven. Back to the training grounds, Captain?
6772884 That got retconned by the 5th season finale. If 3 seasons fit into a year and the fifth season is part of the second year, Nightmare Moon couldn't have placed her Celestia inside the moon "years ago." Looks like we are back to Luna just skipping a few Summer Sun Celebrations.
No offense, but I prefer to imagine Princess Twilght being involved with Pony!Flash while their human counterparts end up together.
When Human Twilight ponied up there was no mention of her wings which I thought will happen but I would've liked to have read the girls questioning as to why she hadn't grown wings like Princess Twilight.
Wonder if that means Celestia thought Luna was simply a thousand years late for breakfast...
the story fell apart the momnet you brought in the flash romance stuff this is why i dont like him as a character the creators made him just as a love itnerest when fans did not like that they just shoved him a side as his only purpose is to be a love interest so they had nothing else to do with him or any personality to give him
and this is all fan fiction writers use him for a love interest that was your only purpose for him in this story no personality or anything just to shoe horn in some romance and to even give 1 to scitwi even thoe that has nothing to do with your story
6989347 When critiquing a story, it helps to use proper grammar. Also, I think the use of Flash worked very well. It remained canon, mostly offstage, and as far as the Pegasus Flash (who has almost no screen time) goes, he was characterized rather nicely. It made for some good humor with his overbearing loyalty to his Princess.
Twelve years late, huh? The homework for that must be killer!
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Actually he didn't. Flash had no real purpose in the story that wasn't forced, or contrived. And in each movie they toss him at Twilight, they act awkward. Nothing comes from it, other than forced interaction, after forced interaction. He has the personality of cardboard, and was only useful as a McGuffin / walking scenery. One that could have been replaced by any of the human Mane 6, and been more believable.
The whole throwing a male at Twilight for straight shipping fodder is the same, awful, crappy, waste of writing that you see with a lot of straight ships. "Oh Twilight needs a man! Here lets make an OC stallion. Now the meet and instantly have lovey dovey eyes. Then they get together, because he has a penis. And filly fooling is icky."
Seriously makes me want to kick him repeatedly in the throat every time he pops up in the movies.
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Could have used better grammar and a few periods and commas. But you're right in why Flash was made, and that he has no personality, nor does he have any purpose. He was written with the same cookie cutter BS that you see in a lot of poorly done OC ships (most of the straight ones at least).
And is actually the only part of this story I don't like. He was created in the show as a McGuffin, that had no real purpose other than a love interest. That not only never went anywhere, but came out of left field, had no build up, with a person that has the personality of cardboard. Which makes sense since he's walking scenery. I seriously hope in the next fic they don't become an item.
I mean Equestria has more mares than stallions. By 1.85 to 1. So if HumanEquestria is a double 1 to 1 equivalent (other than age, living status, and tribal differences (obviously)) the whole "you have to want a man", and "gay hate" that pops up in the human side. Makes no sense. Especially since the bigger the populace the higher percentage of lesbians or ponies who'll never be with a stallion.
Not to mention Twilight has more evidence organically of her being gay, than she does of her being straight. Which only pops up when she's human, and even then only for brief seconds when near Flash.
As for here. It's just as bad. Twilight sees Flash. Twilight goes gaga for Flash (who by the way, is mentioned that she feels nothing for the pony version). He disappears in moments, having yet again served no real purpose.
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"Okay, now you should totally make out with yourself!"
Yes, Twilight's love is truly awe inspiring, almost Christ-like. Except Jesus didn't kill a sinner and replace them with a younger copy of themselves to bring up as apprentice.
Honestly, I am this close to making this the second fic I ever downvoted. I don't care that 99% of it is good and well written, in fact that makes it even worse when the other 1% so nonchalantly espouses terrible ethics.
7510046 I recommend reading the sequel. Twilight doesn't just "brush it off" like you think she does and the whole thing is a driving force for her in this story. Plus it is said an excessive number of times that she literally had no other choice because Starlight wouldn't back down. It was the lesser of two evils as far as Twilight saw it, but she is still scared of the consequences.
6772774 She can file it as a long term cultural study, can't get detention if she was doing classwork.
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LOOPHOLE ABUSE!!!!!!!!!!!
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come on he's Engie. That's like his whole thing.
Not that impossible. You should see how long some Indian girls can get their hair. So jelly~
Anyway, nice story. Some of the head canony bits rubbed me the wrong way, not feeling quite right but honestly a lot of the changes were also very welcome, especially Cinch getting a firmer comeuppance. Was briefly intrigued by the idea Twilight might actually stay at Crystal Prep and maybe bring the Shadowbolts into the loop but oh well, that's honestly another story waiting to happen all by itself.
Dang, never thought I'd see them do that.
He's so gonna hate them because of this.
How am I not surprised she'd say that.
Well that's good to know.