A few days after King Sombra's defeat and the Crystal Empire is starting to recover, but some effects still linger. Most ponies have managed to regain who they were and what they did, but much of their past is still shrouded in the remnants of the tyrant's power.
But today the guards found somepony in the dungeon, somepony very strange with very odd quirk.
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Wow... that was awesome! Did not exspect that ending. Good job.
7714145 Thanks, I wrote this a long time ago and just never finished the ending right. It was originally based on a the song Lullaby for a princess, but gender swapped.
Not a bad read. There's a few rough spots that could be cleaned up, but the story has a nice message.
Now that's a twist I didn't see coming. Good story. I'd upvote this story, but I don't seem to be able to do so.
7714309 If you'd like to suggest specific edits (like the fact that I used "winced" way too often) feel free to PM me. I'm always looking to improve as a writer and your constructive feedback is appreciated.
7714327 Thank you
I'm not crying..
7714641 No, of course not. It's just beginning to rain, that all.
Holy F
king hay. I actually shed a tear on this. There are so few stories that actually get me to tear. Especially for a villain.
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Thank you, I'm glad you liked it.
I WANT A SEQUEL! pwease/
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I don't even know how I would continue this. Combo sequel/prequel with Legario remembering Sombra's fall while learning to deal with modern life in Equestria?
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I would say something having to deal with him revealing who he is, why Sombra turned evil, all that, it could make for a great read.
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I'll consider it, but I've already got a couple of incomplete stories on the back burner and a new child so it will be a while
Holy faux, that was good! I would love a either a prequel telling how he fell or a sequel telling how they react to how he was just trying to help! Also nice M*A*S*H* reference
(if that’s what you were going for)
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Thank you, I appreciate that and yeah I was going a little for the M*A*S*H. Had been watching a lot at the time of writing and some things just filter in, ya know?
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Heh, yeah makes sense, besides it a great show!
Very unusual passage, I like it)))
SOOO....IS CADANCE RELATED TO SOMBRAS LINE ????
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Yes, in this story Cadence is related to Sombra.