You know that moment when you just meet... that pony? The one who you have the instant chemistry with, and you can just tell that you're meant to complete each other's hearts?
Shining Armor felt that when he met Chrysalis at a park in Canterlot. Granted, she was disguised as Fleur de Lis, but that wasn't the point. He was attracted to her, be it by her looks, or her regal demeanor, and that's really all that matters.
Slowly, they fell in love, even after Chrysalis revealed her true form to the white unicorn. They're begining to imagine an entire life with each other, growing old together.
First, though, Chrysalis must meet Shining's parents.
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This is certainly different. I like it.
The girl your mom always warned you about.
Interesting. Also leaves the possibility for humor some day if Velvet ever runs into the mare Chrysalis chose to appear as.
One note about writing: new speaking, new paragraph. When you have Night Light and Velvet talking, you have both doing so in the same paragraph multiple times. It's not as bad as some cases since you seem to keep it pretty clear who is speaking when, but still.
That was the only issue I really noticed. I am curious to see what all happens during this meeting and look forward to the next to chapters (barring the urge for you to expand it further). You also have some interesting development for Night Light and Twilight Velvet, with some entertaining humor worked into it.
shows promise, keep it up.
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Velvet already knows who Rarity is. She recognizes her (or rather her form which Chrysalis has taken) as "[her] daughter's best friend".
LOOOOVVEEE IT!! Wonderful job so far boo!
Oh god, this is looking great. The characterization for Twilight Velvet and Night Light is hilarious, and the meeting with Chrysalis was fantastic. Now to wait for the next chapter and the shenanigans that will inevitably ensue.
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I like it so far
This pleases me. Do go on.
6543248 Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed!
6543270 OMG YES!!!
6543679 Advice noted! I've started the second chapter, and I've been paying special attention to that, so thank you for that notice!
6544798 I shall! Thanks!
6545147 THANKS BOO.
6547223 Haha, thank you!! Hope you enjoy!
6547897 Yes. Yes it will be.
6548606 Thank you! Glad you enjoyed!
6552216 Hmmmm... Perhaps.
So cool...i cant wait for the next chapter
This will end in tree sap, somehow.
I wonder if Velvet's gotten any pictures of her daughter's friend to be able to recognise Rarity's form.
Hahahah, best first impression? Best first impression.
The next chapter can't come soon enough.
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Raziel-chan
Can't believe I didn't read this until now!
Funniest scene EVER!
Oh my god, I'm just imagining that and putting it on repeat.
That's not good enough for a sons' girlfriend.
That's just Twi being an asocial shutin most of her life.
Fifties? Hot DAMN she's fine for her fifties.
She sounds lovely Shining.
I thought Shining was the one who always got grounded?
She's so pretty.
New?Did he dump Cadance? Thank Faust, I never liked her.
6801075 Haha, I'm glad you enjoyed it!!! The new chapter will be coming out soon!
I'd wish their was more of this story, I like the idea of Chrysalis being Shining Armor's old fillyfriend.
Great read and idea glad chrisy is getting some love. New chapter when?
I would like to have a new chapter please.
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Me too
*sighs* Yet another single-chapter to a story obviously meant to be many multiple chapters, wasting Internet megabytes that could be used for porn. *shakes head sadly*
well drat, and this sounded interesting, but no point reading and getting attached to a story that's been abandoned...
Nice premise. Hope one day you return to it.
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Lol
Lol can wait for shining to try and explain his mare friend has kids a thousand of them( Chrysalis gave birth to remember of her Hive they are her kids) and is a queen.