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AskNightmareLuna


I am a recreational writer so it may take me a long time to publish stories. I may even try my hoof at making Youtube videos. We shall see.

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To be brief this could have been/ should have been fleshed out in a couple of chapters, there are a lot of details but too little room

6599923 You will be happy to know that I am planning a sequel. A longer story that explores deeper and more plot. (both types :derpytongue2:)

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You know what I am, there is a lot of potential to make something very saucy as well an interesting but I won't dictate my preference to which lest it impact what you want to write. I am however, as always a fan of tight plots so don't go the other direction with my criticism and add too much fat to your story otherwise it will be too much for one person to handle.

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