KShez: a user on Fimfiction who likes to write stories about various things like SoarinDash and the occasional tragedy or adventure. Became a Brony on 6/3/14 and it's changed my life!
Soarin and Rainbow Dash have been friends for a long time, but they've both wanted to be more than that. When they finally accomplish this, tragedy strikes the couple. Will they be able to pull through together? How many tears will be shed by the reader?
Please feel free to give your criticism in the comments so I can know how to get better as a writer. Thanks guys (and girls)!
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I like this story very much, hopefully you continue with this story. I understand if you won't be able to get much done having writing my own stories so it is difficult especially with school and all that.
Feedback I'd say that the story is quite good. It's spaced well, not going to fast or to slow, grammar and spelling is good so overall I give it four out of five eggs!
I like it as well! But I recommend in the description to take off the
People don't really like that, it's what I've learned.
That was awesome! Too bad I didn't get time to comment on chapter 0!
KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK
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Thank you very much!
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Thank you for the feedback! Yeah, school is gonna bite me right in the flank here in about two months...
Awesome job!
I usually don't find many Soarindash stories that contain Spitfire being supportive, so that was a nice touch. Especially since she was willingly being supportive. I'm exited to see how this rolls out.
ALSO THE SOARINDASH FLUFF WAS ADORABLE!!!
ADORABLE!!!!
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Thanks! I'm trying to give this story that kind of "casual couple just having fun" vibe. I might be failing terribly and I don't know it.