It's Hearth's Warming, and while it is a holiday to be holly and jolly, Spike doesn't seem to be. After a huge fight with Twilight after an accident, Spike gets visited by Clike, a so-called angel. Spike wishes he was never born, and it was granted... What happens around him isn't as it seems...
This is a Christmas one-shot made by yours truly. Merry Christmas, guys! Whatever day it is you read this!
(And yes, this is pretty much an MLP version of 'It's A Wonderful Life'.)
Ok to get the gist of this it's basically when spike makes a wish and comes true and no one knows himthen he makes it right.
Tell me if I'm wrong.
6717176 Just around about. I tried to also tie in how he affects the lives of some ponies, his friends. How well does it work here? Blah? Yeah? Eh?
This is a great story and it was fun to read
also, here's some spelling errors I found:
I think you meant to say his wish.
I think you mean Rainbow.
I think you meant to say I'm sorry I scared you.
Holy heck.
Welp. That's going to take me a while to read. But I'm sure I'll enjoy it!
6717636 have to be honest not saying its rubish but i got quite bored its just not my cup off tea
Fantastic story, Gen! great work!! life lesson and all
There were a lot of grammar and punctuation errors, but aside from that the story was pretty nice.
It's an interesting concept but fails in delivery . the main catyclism for twilight and the others to get their cutie marks and ultimately get to know each other is rainbow dash doing a rainboom, and spike plays no part in that . Regardless if the egg had not hatch , twilight would have still lost control of her powers and celestia seeing her powers would have still asked her to become celestia's protege , pinkie would have learned how to have fun , and so forth . Also someone else would have gotten spikes assistant job .since celestia would have seen twilights potential anyways . As much as I like the lil guy . He is probably the only character that you can replace with someone else and things would still have turned out the same .
The Writters should put a story like this in the show but I doubt they will but anyway good story pal
yes they should make a episode of this concept because you don't know what you have until it's gone
A most heartwarming story. Everything was well paced as we learned just how much a difference having Spike around really makes in the world of Equestria.
Thanks for the enjoyable read. :)
Well... That was certainly entertaining. 👍
Of course, I'm a little confused. Surely Pinkie, Dashie, Fluttershy, A.J., and Rarity had been friends long before they met Twilight. There earlier attitudes wouldn't have changed... if not for this even bigger problem:
Shouldn't this alternate reality have Equestria under the reign of Nightmare Moon? Without Spike, Twilight would probably have grown more bitter; without the Twilight we know in love, there would be no Elements of Harmony; and without the Elements, Nightmare Moon would've won.
Also... What about the Crystal Empire? What would've happened in a world without "Spike the Brave and Glorious?"
I really like this concept, although I do feel that Spike's Reason for not wanting to be born was a bit too over-reactionary.