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SoulHook


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Previously on Pony Ball Z!

Midnight: AAAAAAAAAAAAA!
Celestia: AAAAAAAAAAAAA!

Well it was worth the wait. :pinkiehappy: Thank you for making me a happy brony :pinkiesmile:

I do hope you werent too disappointed by having to add the clop. :pinkiesad2:

Wouldnt want you to think I dont appreciate your story telling :pinkiegasp:

gotta say, great story.

plus don't worry about not being native english, i am and i dont fully understand the language, so i make up my own words which sound similar to what i mean. :derpyderp2:

707859 I was more of having the image like this_

Midnight: Oh no, she's invincible! I have to use my ultimate technique!
Nightmare Moon: Oh no, not the ultimate technique!
Midnight: HAAAAAAAAA
Celestia: HAAAAAAAAA
Nightmare Moon: HAAAAAAAAA
Random guard: HAAAAAAAAA
Celestia: *fires random magic beams*
Luna: HAAAAAAAA
Midnight: HAAAAAAAAA *cape flying all around*

Nah, but seriously, it was fun writing your story. And the writing clops a part of hat my talent does, so it was pretty much meant to end like that. No hard feelings, man ;)

709724

I bust out laughing at the random guard going HAAAAA! :rainbowlaugh:

Hiyo! Mister Moneybags' new account, remember me?
...:trixieshiftleft:
Yeah screw you too.
This is so unlike you.:rainbowderp: Could it be? An emotionally investing character study on the pursuits of a lost cause. Despite having lost his Queen, he still trudges on, desperately fighting for her. Bound to his empress no matter what happens, whether she be imprisoned or not. An admirable tragic hero opposing the established order? This story is an epic. How could you possibly make this inappropriate?:pinkiehappy:

:twilightangry2:MOTHER F***ING SH** C*** B**** ON A F***ING D*** PUNK ASS DIPSH** WHYYY!!!???
You almost did it... you were so close to making a... GAAAAAAHHHHH!

711195 Why, hello on you too! Well this was a commission for a guy who wanted me to write something like this. And I was close to...what? :twilightsheepish:

711611

To making a fic for all ages to enjoy... only to lock yourself out with clop... bastard. But that's why people love you, isn't it?:pinkiehappy:

711676 pretty much. I fear I would my stories would be less popular if you didn't aim for the group of perverts :rainbowlaugh:

715204

Well im fresh out of child souls to fork over to SoulHook that just wont happen unless I offer him more...and the planets align again. Those planets are inconsiderate that way. :trixieshiftright:

Nicely done my friend nicely done.:moustache::moustache::moustache:

English is not your first language? I can't tell, from the small fau-paus in chapter 1 it seemed you just had a hard time editing.

Seriously though, this is an awesome story.

For Great Justice!

753757 thanks with all of my heart, man :raritystarry:

I love reading a great story from a talented author instead of "he fucked, she fucked, the end." like a lot of people seem to write. This was truly a great one whenever I tried to stop, five minutes later I had to start reading again. Wish it didn't have to end!
P.S.
713642 I burst out in tears at the pic!

as always its really good and u would not be u with no clop fav
:moustache:

Why the fuck is there no Luna emoticon?

1957706 Because Luna's sheer sexiness would make it automatically R-rated :rainbowlaugh:

Why'd he get to bang luna? He murdered several guards but there's no punishment? Huh?

Someone to fight Celestia finally

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