A changeling worker masquerading as a struggling pony poet. (Who writes very little actual poetry)
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OK, so despite being full of angst and completely depressing, this was actually good. The random shift from second to third p.o.v was a little off putting but not altogether bad. A few cases of misused words, but otherwise a good fic. Nicely done.
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Sorry, I wrote this after not sleeping for almost two days. I'll fix it.
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Thanks for that pointing that out. I am utterly without editor.
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Fixed.
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And thank you for the offer, but I must admit that I am rather fond of my own fumbling attempts.