It's been months since Altamir woke up in a new place, filled with talking Griffons and who knows what else. (We do.) Having had enough of slaughtering his friends for the amusement of the crowd and the Emperor, he and his fellow sufferers break free, leaving Griffonstone in ruins, and finds himself in a new home in the company of another Human... Let's hope it goes well.
There aren't enough material for me to see if I really want to read this story or not...
Question: Who is the one who woke up? Who is the story about? Where is the foreshadowing? There are some very important elements that are missing from the description, as well as the story itself. If I were you, I'd go back and provide a bit more detail.
6833487 Done so! Thanks!
*Looks suspiciously at the title of this story*
I like it, cant wait for more.