Rainbow Coloured Balloons

With Rarity and Applejack both having an special somepony for their own. The site makes Rainbow Dash happy but hates how lovely dovely the two started acting.

After going to her friend; Pinkie Pie party and being the only pony there. It doesn't help getting snowed in an building with the same pony who can be really hyper. Also doesn't help that Pinkie is kind of cute...Wait! What?

(Co-writer: Inkwell Prose)
(Also my 30th story)

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MixMassBasher

MixMassBasher #1 · Apr 18th, 2016 · · ·

A simple ship fic but the romance felt too rushed though.

huntersunday

huntersunday #2 · Apr 18th, 2016 · · ·

Its okay few pointers. In your summary you say Applejack and Rarity have special someponies, but it is never mention with Applejack. I also felt as if the ending got really rushed.

One last thing. "Why yes Pinkie, you're mine friend"
I think you meant my

Mister Phoenix

Mister Phoenix #3 · Apr 18th, 2016 · · ·

7136049 Yes I mix things up from time to time, as much as I don't like to say it, I'm not perfect. But I thought it wasn't really important, because just like The Waterfall this was going to be a part of a one shot series, a reboot of my first story Seven Days. So because the first one not going well, I threw away that idea and well in short, Applejack is dating Spike and Rarity is dating the O.C I created and need to find a new home for Looker.

7136048 And Yes I know, sorry I just wanted to get it done, like a lot of stories when I'm working with someone, besides Jade and the Mistletoe two shots

Mister Phoenix