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Spike feels very melancholy about Hearts and Hooves Day. He starts to feel doubtful about his feelings for Rarity and seeks to confront her about it. Twilight surprises Spike for the day itself but he didn't seem to be receptive to her surprise at all, leaving Twilight feeling broken. Spike is also dealing with feelings of wanting to grow up fast and be mature like the ponies around him.
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There were over a hundred views, yet no comments? At first, I was worried that this story may have been or something like that. However, this was a well written story and I like how everything was handled. Have a like.
The only reason I'm not giving a fav is because it was said that more will be added and I hope it is just as good as this.
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Hi there! I greatly appreciate the fact that you took the time to share your thoughts with me. I am happy that you liked the story enough to give it a thumbs up and be prompted to share your thoughts. It really does show me who is really reading and I'm very happy about it.
Yes. More is going to be added! This wasn't part of the original plan but when I re-read this to myself, it felt...incomplete in a way and then I thought that a side story is necessary to fill up the holes that the Main Story had. Reason why they weren't included in there was because I had intended to make the Main Story about Spike, and I felt as though focus on Twilight Sparkle and Rarity would detracted from the main focus of the story which was Spike's internal struggles.
Once again, thank you for your feedback and I hope to please when I post the Side Story!
...I love it. Especially the end. So, are Twilight and/or Rarity going to be meeting this mystery pony any time soon?
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Sweet! Thank you so much for reading the Side Story! If you don't mind, what specific parts did you love about it?
Also, to answer your question, I may or may not write a sequel. If enough people push for it, I may consider it. However, I'm just writing what I want to see for now.
7008702 I loved how Sweetie Belle was the one to calm/advise Rarity. I also especially loved the fireworks display.
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Ah! Sweetie Belle! Yes, I imagined this scenario taking place in the 4th season before they got their Cutie Marks, so I imagined this scenario that if it was real, could be a minor foreshadowing to their true talent as Cutie Mark counselors.
I really wish you'd tagged Trixie. She plays a tremendously significant role, and if I had known that Spike and Trixie--two characters who scarcely interact, yet the only two characters I love seeing interact--had a full-fledged conversation in this story, I would've read it a long-ass time ago.
Props for that, and for spelling "Golden Oak Library" correctly. Everyone else likes to call it "Golden Oaks Library."
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Thanks for the feedback!
Well, I did leave a subtle hint for observant eyes in the story's cover. It's not too cryptic, but not too obvious, either. My intention was to create an air of mystery. I think that by leaving Trixie out of the character's featured yet leaving a subtle hint she's there, readers would be more inclined to take a look inside. Once fans of Trixie saw that she played that role, readers would be pleasantly surprised.
...Really, now? I had no idea that kind of error exists. Good thing I don't read anybody else's stories.